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Bathing Spot (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
You've never drunk straight from the carton, And you always hold yourself so no one Focuses on your lovehandles, But I know you've got a secret place Somewhere on the shore Where you aren't afraid to get wet As long as you are alone. But I've been there too, So it's our little secret now. A two person thing. I'm hoping you won't mind being bothered While bathing. Just close your eyes and Pretend I am just passing by.

Up the ladder: Jeremiah is mud
Down the ladder: Pretty Little Dead Thing

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8813
Posted: May 12, 2004 7:21 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2004 7:21 PM PDT
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