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Bathing Spot (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
You've never drunk straight from the carton,
And you always hold yourself so no one
Focuses on your lovehandles,
But I know you've got a secret place
Somewhere on the shore
Where you aren't afraid to get wet
As long as you are alone.
But I've been there too,
So it's our little secret now.
A two person thing.
I'm hoping you won't mind being bothered
While bathing.
Just close your eyes and
Pretend I am just passing by.
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Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8813
Posted: May 12, 2004 7:21 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2004 7:21 PM PDT
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