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Selkie (An Antique of Lurid Partes - w/Girl on Girl Action!) (Free verse) by ecargo
Maeve came in shadow, to the crest
of stone that crouched over the sea,
watched hours under skies buttressed
by pinnacle and soaring tree.
Alone, she walked along the sand,
treading rills like white lace laid
upon a bridal bower, fanned
with soft salt wind, while music played:
Sea caves moaned like whales, a dirge,
and welling tides uprising brought
the symbol crash of ocean surge,
a song to sting a heart unsought.
No wedding chant to speed her heart,
nor loverâs air to heat her blood,
no suitorâs serenade to start
within her tug of tide and flood.
And so she walked at close of day
the path that winded down to shore,
and sometimes saw off, far away
strange folk remarked in ancient lore.
Liquid eyes and liquid grace
sleek and black amidst the waves,
cavorting free, apart a race
oft glimpsed within the flooded caves.
To most, they wore a beastâs visage,
whiskered snout and sleek-furred pelt,
shy and strange, an ancient bridge
to antique age when marvels dwelt
in kingdoms aired or undersea,
now seldom seen in modern age,
a remnant of lost history,
when earth was lit by song and mage.
As Maeve stood, a sound rose, somber:
songs of distance and desire
filled the air, swelled ever stronger
a Wild Hunt flung ever higher.
The night sky spun, the sound grew wild
like wail of wind and boom of storm,
a reckless chase beneath the piled
waves, as voice gave sorrow form.
Whales slipped by like shadows racing;
shattered sea to skim the argent
sky, and by them, sleek shapes pacing,
matching speed and beauty, ardent,
yearning to embrace the night.
As Maeve watched, one fell behind,
sleek, reflecting silver light,
as luminous as seagems mined
beneath the nightjade surging sea.
Maeve watched unseen, for she had planned
against such opportunity
to compel from sea to land
a denizen of caverns shining
gold and white with walls of pearl,
who, seduced by loversâ pining,
was transformed by tears amidst waveâs curl.
Salt to salt , with care Maeve spent
seven tears among the reeds,
calculated, no torrent
of feelings let nor sorrow freed.
Cool the drops that fell as bidden
colder she who bid them spill,
and in her heart, like a worm hidden,
chill resolve to mete her will.
The creature screamed, a rending sound;
lay panting in the shallow race,
as if washed ashore, half-drowned;
fair of form and, fairer, face.
A heap lay by her, blackest skin
and she lay naked in the foam;
a threnody torn from within
she crooned, of loss of self and home.
Maeve knelt by her, took her hand,
kissed the tears that stained her cheeks
led her from the surf to land
to rest beneath the moonwashed peaks.
She rocked the girl to calm her fears;
filled her arms with wild roses,
stroked her face and dried her tears,
showed her how the breeze exposes
sweet the scented sage and brake,
clasped her close and named her Roane,
smoothed her tears to soothe her ache,
but still the girl did weep and moan.
Soft the flesh as white as milk;
Maeve laid Roane down and touched her skin,
smoothed hair like midnight spun to silk,
kissed her lips and softly stroked within.
Beneath the hush of circling sky
did earth and sea together come,
sank together with a sigh,
and rode the tide till blood did hum.
Tossed high, the tumult took them, pounding,
they tumbled, wild, in the rough,
sweet sting of salt, the waves surrounding,
drowning, then, spent, âneath the bluff.
Maeve fed her wine and berries crushed
with herbs; they curled in shadows deep;
she stroked the silken skin rose-flushed,
and kissed sweet, stained lips soft with sleep.
Oh cold heart! to cruelly lure
the girl, close eyes with kisses three--
Maeve gathered up the crumpled fur
and, silent, slipped into the sea.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.857142
Weighted score: 6.306287
Overall Rank: 868
Posted: July 12, 2006 4:26 PM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2006 4:26 PM PDT
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P.S. - you didn't read my latin villanelle. It'll be your kind of thing, methinks ;-)
Expect many more accolades to come.