Re: Southern Baptist Redneck Song by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.54	10-Aug-06/10:04 AM
Excellent. I love to laugh at rednecks.
Re: a comment on Aristocrats(Madlib for all those shock poets) by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	10-Aug-06/7:26 AM
I thought I'd give people like you a place to put all your crappy ideas.
Re: Skellington Bakery by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.76.60	10-Aug-06/7:23 AM
Long-winded but learned.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.76.60	10-Aug-06/7:08 AM
Dear Dark Angel, You strike me as being a totally brain-washed piece of US garbage. Kindly do not communicate with your betters again.
Re: Aristocrats(Madlib for all those shock poets) by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.76.60	10-Aug-06/6:56 AM
I see little point in retailing an unoriginal and censored version of the world's stalest joke. I wish I could give this lower than zero. You should be ashamed of yourself. It's neither funny, nor rude, nor anything else. If you want an offensive joke, ask me. Here's a sample of a slightly offensive one. Q. What's the difference between an Israeli soldier and a bucket of shit? A. The handle.
Re: a comment on 1a. Awaken by A db C	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:24 AM
Do you have any ideas? It is meant to be desolate but perhaps the bulky half-prose makes it too much of a dreary sludge through the piece (maybe why it doesn't appeal to you), in fact youve made me think that splitting it down into a few more poetic pieces could help
Re: self-righteousness by calliope	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:19 AM
I have to agree with Ranger here "I think I get it".
Re: fish eye pie by calliope	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:17 AM
The breaks in the line create an interesting disjointed feel to the piece which eminates quality through its perspective. I dont really like the theme and the last verse, the theme is not really comical or serious, and the skills you have shown in conveying the feel of this conversation I feel are better placed to write about different topics. If I had liked the theme I would have given this a 10 for the way you have captured the communication between these two fishing women (maybe I have missed the point of this piece a little). This piece has drawn me in enougth to want to have a look at some of your other piece. Please dont take my opinion too far to heart since I am wrong more often than not these days.
Re: 1a. Awaken by A db C	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158	10-Aug-06/6:09 AM
I've read this a couple of times... but I feel this has to be presented better. You have good material, but somehow I don't find it very appealing. And P.S. welcome to Poemranker. Enjoy.
Re: On the subject of being poor by Stephen Robins	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/6:09 AM
Harsh
Re: Gracy (An ode to my greyhound) by mindsigns	amanda_dcosta 219.93.174.102	10-Aug-06/4:19 AM
Could have been better.
Re: Cataclysm and Echo by MacFrantic	A db C 217.40.63.105	10-Aug-06/12:59 AM
Very echo like and poetic
Re: Chickens by rnuk	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	9-Aug-06/9:39 AM
Dang Commy chickens.
Re: Chickens by rnuk	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.158	9-Aug-06/9:00 AM
Cool poem and idea. Looking out for more.
Re: Children of Wolves by Caducus	A db C 217.40.63.105	9-Aug-06/8:32 AM
Ive read a few of your pieces now and this is by far and away the best out of the 5 or so that I read (It shrieked as if it knew is a great line)
Re: Chickens by rnuk	mindsigns 152.163.100.65	9-Aug-06/8:11 AM
Brilliant, simple and to the point. The ending is classic. Now I know about Marxism. Thanks.
Re: a comment on ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	9-Aug-06/6:46 AM
How dare he try to rhyme "sore" and "draw". Only a redneck can do that.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	9-Aug-06/6:40 AM
I wouldn't mind seeing Rumsfeld sharing a cell with him seeing that he's the one most accountable for the unexpectedly large losses of US soldiers. That man couldn't plan a pillow fight.
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.188.163	9-Aug-06/6:33 AM
No, my question was how come no one seems to point out that we're there for the same reason Rome, England, and Russia were there to name a few, because the middle east is the trading post of the world. It's the center of three major religions. If you control the middle east almost everyone has to deal with you at some point. If you really want peace in the middle east then pray all these radical religious murderous groups are squashed into oblivion. Maybe then the real civilized people of the middle east can reign and peoples life expectancy will go into the retirement age. Can Bush just come out and say we're also there to block off China and Russia and monitor everything that passes through the middle east because we want to be in control of the global economy? No, of course he can't say that. That might cause WWIII. Remember, you wouldn't be living where you're living if it wasn't for one civilisation invading another and taking control of the place. I'm not reading much about the radical atrocities in Africa or Asia so why is that?. Maybe is it because Bush hasn't taken part in any of it yet? Maybe it is.
Re: Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man	mindsigns 63.100.108.20	9-Aug-06/12:45 AM
I usually like disgusting humorous shit , but this one made me a little sick to my stomach, maybe that's the point.