| Re: Sarah Hine's Cries by rahson_s |
leonxic 70.244.48.17 |
11-Aug-06/10:15 PM |
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Well Sara, You better hope you don't live in Vegas, New York, or Miami because CSI will find the truth. They don't fuck around.
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| Re: I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
leonxic 70.244.48.17 |
11-Aug-06/10:11 PM |
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Truly an original subject and entertaining at that. I'll give it a ten for saying troopies, if for nothing else.
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Dream by Ranger |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.149.27 |
11-Aug-06/5:10 PM |
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Yeah poetry is all about thoughts, feelings, and emotions. Don't listen to Ranger -- he just doesn't realise that true poetry comes from the heart, and that there are no rules. Apart from the rule that it must rhyme, of course.
I've always just gone on instinct over actual thought when it comes to writing. I guess I've always been something of a loose cannon. My friends call me Maverick because I work alone, and because my poetry makes them think of things to do with Mavericks. What do you write about?
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| Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.149.27 |
11-Aug-06/5:01 PM |
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| Re: Memories Of Home by Edna Sweetlove |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.149.27 |
11-Aug-06/4:57 PM |
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Were I but ten years younger, I'd have scalded this piece beyond all reckoning. Alas my obstinate buttocks have outgrown their jodhpurs, and whilst they clung loyally to their master's haunches for a time, it was with an act of tearful necessity that I disembarked from their fleshy embrace and watched them flee like dwarves into the cold dark night.
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Dream by Ranger |
some deleted user 196.25.255.210 |
11-Aug-06/3:44 PM |
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You were rude and obnoxious and if you can't see that then you should get professional help.
Am I annoying you yet?
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Dream by Ranger |
some deleted user 196.25.255.210 |
11-Aug-06/3:42 PM |
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PS: Leave you alone? Ok now you sound like a three year old. Why does this not surprise me *raises eyebrow*
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| Re: a comment on Suicide Dream by Ranger |
some deleted user 196.25.255.210 |
11-Aug-06/3:41 PM |
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Rules? RULES YOU SAY? WHAT THE FUCK ???? There ARE NO RULES in REAL POETRY .... it's all about emotions and getting a point across ... rules are for idiots who don't know how to write without them. Enough said.
*Berates self for wasting time on a fuckwit*
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| Re: Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 194.222.223.239 |
11-Aug-06/12:31 PM |
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Try to imagine not shitting. Does a contradiction arise from this proposition? You are a colossal boob.
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| Re: I don't usually write erotica and this is no exception by Edna Sweetlove |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 194.222.223.239 |
11-Aug-06/12:30 PM |
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This poeme is disappointing in comparison to the title, which is genius.
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| Re: The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93 |
11-Aug-06/12:15 PM |
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I don't know the source of this one. And i don't like the exclamation mark at the end. It's unnecessary.
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93 |
11-Aug-06/12:14 PM |
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I liked this one. Some of your stuff is very clever. Some is not. Like the curate's egg.
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| Re: I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93 |
11-Aug-06/12:12 PM |
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Why do you have the = signs and the _ sign in your name? And what is the "PI" for?
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| Re: I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93 |
11-Aug-06/12:11 PM |
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This is very good indeed. Eric would be very proud of you were he sufficiently with us.
Bucharest is not as exciting as Newcastle of course.
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| Re: Reminder of Failure by Miggy |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93 |
11-Aug-06/12:08 PM |
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| Re: The Girl With the Tye-Dyed Hair by wilco |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.6.93 |
11-Aug-06/12:06 PM |
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Interesting narrative but a cop-out ending.
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| Re: Something More by drnick |
drnick 24.176.22.254 |
11-Aug-06/8:17 AM |
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fuck, it should say "you need to lose.", not "you need to loose."
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| Re: Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man |
A db C 217.40.63.105 |
11-Aug-06/6:33 AM |
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| Re: bimby by sneakerpimp |
A db C 217.40.63.105 |
11-Aug-06/6:32 AM |
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does this make sense?
The passion you pretended
was precociously to obtain
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| Re: Freud Spoke Of A Mother's Tongue, But I Interpret Dreams by Ranger |
A db C 217.40.63.105 |
11-Aug-06/6:30 AM |
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