Re: a comment on Raising the nap by howl	howl 81.179.116.59	27-Nov-06/2:03 AM
what do you mean re 'pushing it forward'?
Re: Raising the nap by howl	Dovina 12.72.37.46	26-Nov-06/6:12 PM
"pushes it forward" in the first verse tells me to stop reading. The idea isn't bad, but too many words and discontinuous thought.
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.37.46	26-Nov-06/6:05 PM
I know the grammar of that line is awful. Hoping the thought isn’t. Thanks.
Re: Journey To The Centre Of The Loom by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 12.72.37.46	26-Nov-06/6:04 PM
Mystically sullen. Kudos for complicity.
Re: Instruction by Dovina	pete 62.56.84.185	26-Nov-06/5:49 PM
"were future world so kind" perhaps? :).....aaahh i see, a sense-timing paradox thing ... nice
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.37.46	26-Nov-06/5:33 PM
Oh, right. It’s Essay-on-Foreign-Travel,-Replete-with-Chiches Ranker.
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.30	26-Nov-06/5:16 PM
This isn't ConversationRanker. Get rid of it.
Re: a comment on Sonnet 1 (Nevermore - The last sonnet) by Schlinkey	Schlinkey 62.16.135.98	26-Nov-06/10:00 AM
Hmh, deleted my previous comment; this sonnet was written tongue-in-cheek. The sullen poet is obviously not meant to be Poe. Both the title, and the message should be hints enough ;p
Re: a comment on Sonnet 1 (Nevermore - The last sonnet) by Schlinkey	Schlinkey 62.16.135.98	26-Nov-06/9:52 AM
Think so too, to be honest. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll fixit methinks.
Re: a comment on In sickness and in health by Schlinkey	Schlinkey 62.16.135.98	26-Nov-06/9:50 AM
Thank you :)
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.34.155	26-Nov-06/6:23 AM
Oh gosh, it's just a conversation. Really, quit. :)
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.34.155	26-Nov-06/6:22 AM
It would truly be a nerdy thing to post an essy here, on Derrida, or as Horus8, on life in general. But the place is so vacant, why not?
Re: a comment on She dreams by amanda_dcosta	Ranger 62.252.32.15	26-Nov-06/5:01 AM
Much better
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	26-Nov-06/5:00 AM
Update - make that a whole essay on Derrida. I'm such a nerd.
Re: Instruction by Dovina	some deleted user 64.140.228.224	26-Nov-06/4:17 AM
Well done Dovina--holds its own with some of your best. It's nice to read some decent stuff for a change.
Re: She dreams by amanda_dcosta	some deleted user 64.140.228.224	26-Nov-06/4:09 AM
Very well done Amanda--a refreshing change from some of the stuff thats been posted lately--keep up the good work.
Re: a comment on Instruction by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	26-Nov-06/1:50 AM
I don't have anything particularly recent to post except for half an essay on Derrida. Poetry websites seem to have sucked the life out of me. I am still around though, whenever there's anything worth commenting on.
Re: a comment on She dreams by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 61.17.227.133	25-Nov-06/10:28 PM
D, Ranger.. thanks. This is awesome. Must be really good since you both gave me a nine. :-))))))))))) I am however making changes to the line that reads "of oaks and pine and firs growing tall" (3rd verse, 3rd line), and changing it back to "as snow flakes fall upon her nose". Think that works best. Thanks.
Re: Swollen Tongue by MacFrantic	Dovina 12.72.34.35	25-Nov-06/7:49 PM
I thought it was 1,764. Yes, I'm sure of it. And you will sleep again.
Re: Sonnet 1 (Nevermore - The last sonnet) by Schlinkey	Dovina 12.72.34.35	25-Nov-06/7:46 PM
The world of rhymes is not “naught but jumbled chance.” Poe would not have said so, nor would his raven, Nevermore. Only this poem would and is.