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Sonnet 1 (Nevermore - The last sonnet) (Sonnet) by Schlinkey
As boredom plagues and haunts an idle mind, A ghostly struggle ever fought in vain; These words are wailed; "Alas, I'm left behind!" Poor man; he might as well have been insane. For always claimed and worn; the words of old, Indeed; no longer fresh, all spoiled and soiled. Old lines are all but hoarded quite like gold, In truth, nigh every joy forever foiled! Is this what present poets call prowess? The world of rhymes is naught but jumbled chance! "Nay, nevermore", the sullen poet says, The bored, impatient pen shall cease its dance! No artist writes as in the days of yore, And thus; I quote the liar, "Nevermore."

Up the ladder: Close To You
Down the ladder: The Cherub Bird's Love Song

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Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11279
Posted: November 19, 2006 12:45 PM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2006 8:07 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 25-Nov-06/2:05 PM | Reply
The double rhyme of spoiled and soiled is distracting, the rest is very readable.
[n/a] Schlinkey @ 62.16.135.98 > Ranger | 26-Nov-06/9:52 AM | Reply
Think so too, to be honest. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll fixit methinks.
[6] Dovina @ 12.72.34.35 | 25-Nov-06/7:46 PM | Reply
The world of rhymes is not “naught but jumbled chance.” Poe would not have said so, nor would his raven, Nevermore. Only this poem would and is.
[n/a] Schlinkey @ 62.16.135.98 > Dovina | 26-Nov-06/10:00 AM | Reply
Hmh, deleted my previous comment; this sonnet was written tongue-in-cheek. The sullen poet is obviously not meant to be Poe. Both the title, and the message should be hints enough ;p
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