| Re: a comment on STAN by poetry_rancour |
poetry_rancour 142.205.240.27 |
13-Mar-07/12:40 PM |
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Perhaps I ran out of time and wit!
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| Re: a comment on a limerick from kent by nentwined |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
13-Mar-07/12:32 PM |
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Yep, it's a limerick from Kent.
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| Re: a comment on a limerick from kent by nentwined |
nentwined 76.167.62.172 |
13-Mar-07/12:26 PM |
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I honestly don't have a clue what I was doing here. I barely have a glimmer of memory of writing it. I'm sure there was a gimmick?
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| Re: a limerick from kent by nentwined |
richa 81.179.219.225 |
13-Mar-07/12:23 PM |
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Interesting subversion. The grammar looks a bit convoluted. Don't get l4.
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| Re: snacktime by jesslew |
richa 81.179.219.225 |
13-Mar-07/12:11 PM |
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Don't like the last line. Like the whimsy of 'bananas are edible smiles' and the idiosyncrasy of 'everyone needs potassium.
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| Re: STAN by poetry_rancour |
richa 81.179.219.225 |
13-Mar-07/12:09 PM |
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I don't get the ending. Looks kind of forced.
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| Re: On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove |
Holy Tits 195.194.75.209 |
13-Mar-07/11:07 AM |
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| Re: why? by nentwined |
Holy Tits 195.194.75.209 |
13-Mar-07/11:05 AM |
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tripe of the highst order
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| Re: a limerick from kent by nentwined |
Holy Tits 195.194.75.209 |
13-Mar-07/11:04 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Pedaling West by Dovina |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
13-Mar-07/10:49 AM |
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Please don't pray for that. My God, do you suppose his manhood will be threatened?
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| Re: a comment on A Question by poetry_rancour |
poetry_rancour 142.205.240.27 |
13-Mar-07/10:32 AM |
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I believe a "boo" is rap-talk for a boyfriend. Heard it a couple of times on music video's and thought it was funny. Perhaps I was wrong.
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| Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt |
some deleted user 195.194.75.209 |
13-Mar-07/10:27 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Within by drnick |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
13-Mar-07/10:22 AM |
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Hopefully, they will tire of themselves and go back to whatever amused them before bothering us here.
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| Re: A Question by poetry_rancour |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
13-Mar-07/10:21 AM |
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Beau is a boyfriend. But what is a "boo'? Anyway, a funny thought.
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| Re: a comment on A New Deal (Rewrite) by oneglove |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
13-Mar-07/10:18 AM |
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I had not heard of it either. But the way you describe it, the protest is the same as all the others. Not that it's a bad protest, only that we hear it so often, it tends to float on past unless endowed with unique ideas or phrasing.
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| Re: a comment on A Question by poetry_rancour |
poetry_rancour 142.205.240.27 |
13-Mar-07/10:08 AM |
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Thank 'ee ma'me. I just wish there was a category for doggerel as it's all I write.
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| Re: A Question by poetry_rancour |
Bethy 165.154.46.93 |
13-Mar-07/10:05 AM |
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hehehe lol...and it should be...:) Bethy
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| Re: STAN by poetry_rancour |
Bethy 165.154.46.93 |
13-Mar-07/10:04 AM |
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talent...fun to read...:) Bethy
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| Re: Just today by MacFrantic |
Bethy 165.154.46.93 |
13-Mar-07/9:56 AM |
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I like this...judgement comes to those who know how the story ends...:) Bethy
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| Re: Pedaling West by Dovina |
Bethy 165.154.46.93 |
13-Mar-07/9:50 AM |
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May God grant you with "Buns of Steel" my dear friend...good poem :) Bethy
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