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on today i just feel like swearing alot. But i won't. by Patsy
9 Aug 2004, 12:09 PM
Much too many questions this raises.
*10.5*
Wonderfully put, and I think that repeating "cold and black was perfect. *9*
Loved this line: "The brother who breathes the color red from the gold filled barn to the American flag."
Very nice!
I prefer carrots to karats, morfs to forms and v8 to vodka (for now).
I bet it's a rubbish song. I bet your friend is rubbish.
I have a friend whose best song is about song writer's block. She's had some of her songs recorded by a large entertainment corporation. When I asked her why her best song wasn't used, she said, 'It's an insider song. It doesn't appeal to people who listen to songs. The corp. felt it would appeal only to those who write songs." They were right. I love the song and your poem but it has a limited audience-- poets.
dear "my name means some really cool, REALLY!!!!!",
Look I understand what you are saying, but you slighted me (and quite a few others) on other pages, so guess what I know that your girlfriend has low self-esteem and allows you to take out your underemployed, loser, angry status out on her and writes it off as "you are creative," but you slight me I slight you, don't get your panties in a bunch...I guess I'm dim, but I don't get why a person who is as smart and as clever as you would respond to anyone who says something thats even remotely insultive, I thought that was something only dim people did.
Look you have some issues, all you do is go to people's page and talk crap and bring in your twisted perspective that's getting very tired, "your dim, your dim, your dim" what are you FIVE? I guess because that guy hurt your feelings on your page and now you want to get the universe back, but get over it, it's done.
You need some kind of release, go look at some porn.
And why don't you write a poem, you haven't posted anything in ages what are you sad or are you just a coward that uses one name to insult and one name to write?
You are dim. Continue with your music and stop this silly bs.
A meow and two licks to you,
cat
Stephen Robins
replying on Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat
9 Aug 2004, 8:05 AM
He's just gutted he did not think of it first and use it in one of his rants by shrouding it with guff and jodphurs.
'Inveterate' seems a fine word choice. What's wrong with it?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat
9 Aug 2004, 6:02 AM
Dunce. You post a comment listing the COMPLEATE LIST OF BUNCOMBE DODGES on someone's poeme, in reply to one of their comments, and then get all uppity when, surprise, surprise, they think you were talking about them. For pity's sake zodiac, how dare you? If someone replies to your comment, by default they are talking to you, and are posting their thoughts there for a specific reason. How dare you have the gall to suggest that cat has an inflated notion of self-importance, or whatever, just because she thought you were staining her jodhpurs?
P.S. "INVETERATE" is the mark of a top-notch dullard.
I didn't post my list on your poem for any specific reason, just because it seemed like as convenient a place for a COMPLEATE LIST OF BUNCOMBE DODGES OF INVETERATE GUFFERS as any other. If I were at all inclined to publish any you-specifick list on your poem, it would probably be called THE COMPLEAT LIST OF COMMON MISTAKEN IDEAS ABOUT POEMRANKER AND ZODIAC MADE BY YOUNG USERS WITH SOMEWHAT INFLATED NOTIONS ABOUT THEMSELVES, and would consist of nothing but mansef recipes and ambiguously-titled links to Christian masturbation-ministry sites. You do the math.
Thanks for the spell check...I usually go over my poems before submitting them, but I guess I missed it. Oh well! As far as preaching to the choir, I would not really call it preaching...and isn't that the point of poetry, being able to relate to what people write? Maybe I am wrong.
Gee, I really like big sporting events like the Olympics. When they are on TV, I can go shopping at Target and I'm in and out in minutes (kinda like sex). It is wonderful level upon which to shop at ignorant venues. I should go shopping now. You should post again. It's been a while. I miss your "POV" on this L.A. lala life.
Oh, you gave yourself a 10 and me a 1. Okay, whatever.
Yeah, us altos generally sing a third below that melody, and a tenor like DgB, well he's all over the scale.
5-7-5 has become 5-3-5, and sobriety drunkenness. You should try it.
You're preaching to the choir. (check pikced)
very chocolate boxy
How is this haiku?