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Torment From The Undead (Free verse) by XxRuby_KillsXx
Torment From The Undead Screaming from the top of my lungs loosing air to breath from Loosing my mind not being able to escape from the altar Feeling all this aggrieve that is eating my insides slowly Just want to amputate my emotions to ail no more I abnegate the truth , for I cant accept it I rather try to abolish my future even if it means having adversity as long as I keep my dignity I earn undead adversaries every time I ignore their invitation to their world, Underneath the mortal surface where immortals rome freely I don’t want to hide for the real world I want to be accepted for who I am No one believes that is right so I run to escape all those broken dreams But the calls from the undead fallow me until I make what they say is the right choice I know what is right for me but they make it into a ado decision This is the torment from the undead they work with the most accursed way until they are victorious But I wont let my dignity down I will be the last one standing on this never ending conflict All will hail to my respect , all will hail to my dignity , all will hail to my strong soul I will extenuate the enemies until they plead for mercy to let them be I will spear there soul for I don’t want to meet up to there level of ignorance

Up the ladder: Dublin, 4-10-04
Down the ladder: Within

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7791
Posted: August 7, 2004 4:30 PM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2004 7:50 PM PDT
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[0] god'swife @ 4.231.162.77 | 7-Aug-04/11:01 PM | Reply
"...until I make what they say is the right choice.

"I will extenuate the enemies... "

Your 'level of ignorance' is olympic.

[n/a] Dan garcia-Black @ 64.160.144.217 > god'swife | 8-Aug-04/12:58 PM | Reply
Gee, I really like big sporting events like the Olympics. When they are on TV, I can go shopping at Target and I'm in and out in minutes (kinda like sex). It is wonderful level upon which to shop at ignorant venues. I should go shopping now. You should post again. It's been a while. I miss your "POV" on this L.A. lala life.
[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 8-Aug-04/12:38 PM | Reply
Oh, you gave yourself a 10 and me a 1. Okay, whatever.
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