Dovina
on a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams by Prince of Void
12 Sep 2004, 3:11 PM
Yea, I've felt like that, the haunting love of divinity, into the mystical world. Why is that? Good poem.
How inventive... I'm really impressed with how imaginative you've become. Why you feel the need to carry on your pitiful
attempts at witt and wry humor at your own expense of sounding
utterly retarded is quite bold, carry on.
Also, I'm not self published.
You can buy my book on Amazon
it's called Juno's Peacock
knock yourself out.
I'm sorry it has to be this way,
but I've never really been into
you or your writing, and this latest attempt
at love on your part makes me feel uncomfortable,
please forgive me, but I can't see you anymore.
As for my mother... Dead, my children... Beautiful
and on my lap, eternally.
Now go fuck yourself eskimo.
Ooh. This made me feel something. Good :)
this's a nice poem
I wrote this about a friend of mine who we'll call "Jack". Jack and his girlfriend as so messed up and so I wrote this not exactly for him, but about him. Having screwy friends is inspiration in a hand basket.
Yeah!
Prince of Void
replying on a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams by Prince of Void
12 Sep 2004, 1:23 PM
Thank you a lot ...yeah You are right that's "seized".
Prince of Void
replying on a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams by Prince of Void
12 Sep 2004, 1:20 PM
Thank you a lot ..yeah u are right that is "seized"?
Yea, I stopped putting spaces after he walked in the room on purpose. Good eye, Garcia :) About the drive-way thing, that was me being stupid in Typoville. But! Being that I also reside in Lazeonia, it will go unchanged. But thank you for bringing it to my attention.
very good poem..i love this poem
sized or seized?
Either way. Good job.
now i understood why i loves your poems
True.
I should vote 1 in retaliation, butI rather like this.
Don't know why I like it. Evocative?
So many ways to interpret this. I can't help feeling it's a "mea cupla" in the christian sense of giving your screwed up life to god (If I didn't have this suspicion it would be a -10-.If it's about something real like a m/f relationship, it gets an extra point. For now -9-.
Says it very well. -10-
The lack of a space after the period might be a device to create a sense of urgency. I'd like to see it used uniformly if that's what it's for. Anyway you look at it -10-.
What a perfect way to die. Nice.
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