Come spawn with me...

How delightful! And brimming with innuendo, too! Like "bounding balls"! And "uterus"!

Now that's a BMW

Good, but I'd like to see you expand it. The "soul doth yearn" thing is a bit (very) old school, but hey, whatever floats your boat.

This is one of you're better ones that I've read but the rhymes are very forced. Maybe try writing it without the rhymes.

I thought this was pretty good up until the "online...instant messages. I think if you get rid of that part and maybe reword some of the ending, you'll really have something here.

"doth", "do'eth", "does"; I chose "doth" just because...er...well... I used to read a lot of Shakespeare's sonnets. Ok, maybe it is a little out of date. Thanks for your inputs. This will be a work in progress as I really liked the way this first stanza turned out. I'll have her call again soon and inspire me toward more. Stay tuned.....

Schizopoda or Macuran, touche! never the less. One of your best.

Yowza.

I don't get these people placing their own poems on their favorites list. You have a whole page of your own with all your poems listed there, all neat and tidy.

fun knee.

This is the most amazingly astute poem ever.

Oddly, the worst part of this is "She wants my wedding ring. I still miss his name. To do it all again, to savor the pain,"

The rule that "each small life Feels itself the center of the universe," while a generally good one, probably does not apply to insects, mollusks, or the aboriginal races.

Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*

Enbibbed, I mulched.

This sounded like this porno parody of that movie the "Hours" I watched the other day, it was called the "Showers".

I just dont know where you get these poems from you must have a great mind!!

well im not quite shore about this one did i see some rude words in this poem?

Is this a story about you and the visitors comeing to see you in your loony bin?