god'swife
on From the despairs by Prince of Void
7 Aug 2004, 10:57 PM
Hauntingly awful.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2004, 8:37 PM
Interesting and unconventional.
could be a bit better considering it's a lyric, where in ny are you from anyway? (8)
"...until I make what they say is the right choice.
"I will extenuate the enemies... "
Your 'level of ignorance' is olympic.
A brief epoch and a little didactic. Good
"who's" "weathered face"
Why the semicolon standing guard off to the right?
The second verse is very nice. It's all good.
Wow that last stanza is really cool. I like how you approached the whole mother earth thing with lines like "A mother whose gravity keeps all children near"
the nice poem ..i felt what u were going to say
sth made me think about this poem ..welldone
ooooookkiiie doookie
until you get your heart broken and say "what was i THINKING!???!" sorry..hope it works out
kaleidascope poon. HAHA i like "evening odds" too.. pretty clever.
i am totally skunked
i cant wait to see the finished product. its like something i'd tell my kids..if i had any..
Soggier than an overly turgid hump-loaf.
and that's when Tina screamed "IKE!"
Thanks maybe yawl are right, he has hurt me 4 times, maybe I should break up with him, but he has a tumor and I dont want to leave him in a time he needs me most....*sighs* so much drama ugh!
"and god goes not at all with wine" ace.
Wow .. I give it a 10 ^__^
Beautiful..I give it a 9..only because the repetion confused me, but im easily confused hehe ^__^
i give ita 8 ^__^