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To you (Free verse) by freelancejoker
Since the very beginning,
I somehow knew that you were the one.
Cannot explain the excitement I got,
Nor the butterflies in my gut,
But it is something,
That provided the link.
I didn't know what.
Funny,
Really.
As you approached me,
And said, "Hi, I'm Y"
I can feel my heart pounding,
And my lungs exploding.
This electrifying experience,
Left me in a deep trance,
What exactly is this I'm feeling?
You went on to intro yourself,
And I felt, what the hell!
Why can't I be myself?
I took a glance at your dimply face,
My heart raced.
I couldn't control the pace,
Or my awkward ways.
I was in a daze,
And at you, I could only gaze.
"Is there something?"
You broke the silence and my stare.
I shyly turned away,
No way could I dare,
To steal a second glare.
"Its nothing"
YOu probed and said "There must be something"
You gave me such a scare,
You seemed to know what I wanted to declare,
and what my heart yearned to bare.
What a great opportunity,
But I went gritt-witty!
A thousand words in my mouth,
But I didn't utter a sound.
Tongue tied,
Lips tight,
How I wished to hide,
In a hole so wide.
You smiled,
like you understood my thoughts.
That beautiful smile,
Made it all worthwhile.
I went out of sorts,
My body cramped in knots,
I was simply dazzled,
My heart was weathered.
"Sre you ok?"
I heard you say "How's the day?"
"A beautiful sunny day!"
Words within words,
A profound approach.
You smirked,
Your shoulders you shirked.
"Ahh yes a beautiful day.."
Finally our eyes met,
On you I was set.
Oh cast me a fisherman's net,
For it's you I want to catch.
This is outta this earth,
Not felt so since my birth.
I knew I knew...
This must be love...
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.142858
Weighted score: 5.8452444
Overall Rank: 1595
Posted: August 6, 2004 10:50 PM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2004 10:50 PM PDT
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