tisa7
on One dot.And the rest is our lives by Prince of Void
11 Aug 2004, 5:26 PM
cool i get the dot
I really like your style
very beautiful poem
MUCHO GOOSTO
whatever that means (just heard it on tv!)
-8-
Very descriptive. I love it. Good luck in your endeavors, we all need it.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
11 Aug 2004, 9:32 AM
Why are you posting Savage Garden lyrics as if they are your own?
Good poem...I loved the ending. -10-
Took me awhile to see the picture. Lol
i love the title of ur poem ...i love the poem ...really a nice poem
HEY< I hate this too FORK YOU VERY MUCH! you're a sick f__k grow up eh?
Way the by (YER TITLES SUCK TOO!)
I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.
SEXY, as ever babe! Love ya, sorry I've been gone so long. don't be afraid to call 'n' say hey! By the way , e-mail me yer phone #, my phone took a chit
and it took your number w/ it.
Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.
I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .
HA, HA, HA, HA,SON PEOPLE GROW THROUGH EXPERIENCE IF
THEY MEET LIFE HONESTLY AND COURAGEOUSLY. THIS IS HOW CHARACTER IS BUILT.I have always learned from EXPERIENCE THAT THE GREATER PART OF OUR HAPPINESS OR MISERY DEPENDS UPON OUR DISPOSITIONS, AND NOT UPON OUR
CIRCUMSTANCES.I'AM HAVING A GOOD TIME PLAYING WITH YOU
ON THIS MATTER, BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT TO SERIOUS.SO I'AM GOING TO LEAVE IT ALONG, BUT i hav'nt been a negro
since back in the 70's (smile)
very good
i feel that the racial argument was utterly retarted
at no point in your work did you make any racial statements or stereotypes.
people need to undrstand that there is a difference between black people and niggers
niggers harbor hatred toward the white man because of the past, they also down white people because they think that we are always trying to supress them WHICH IS NOT THE CASE WITH most WHITE PEOPLE
(i wont go into my own personal beliefs)
if all black people would just lighten up and try not to be so god damn touchy about the past we wouldnt have to deal with all this P.C bullshit
i liked, good work, but i bet she has brown eyes huh?
I'm a blackman that bullshit comment you wrote dont mean a damn thing for what i ask you. I did'nt mean a
thing for asking what is the concept of your lyric? and
you want to stereotype me. you need to stop taking some
of your work so personally. I like the damn lyric. born,raised. great great grandfather hung in mississippi during those times. and people dont like to talk about it.you say a blackman is singing it.his
ass wont be from mississippi.but anyway S.D.you just jump all over me like i wanted to hang you like some nigger on a mississippi tree.get your shit together you help me alot when i join poemranker on my writing. those three zero's you got did'nt come from me.i live in florida. they might have come from mississippi.i bless you with a 9
SELF-RESPECT-WHERE TALENT IS A DWARF,
SELF-ESTEEM IS A GIANT
HANG IN THERE MR BLOBBY!
Let me tell you something bubba, you will never know how a person will feel about anything they read. i dont give a damn what kind of comments you make or what you call a person.so wipe the milk from around your mouth,and grow the fuck up and be a man.and what i mean by that is instead of calling me a embrowned
asshat or i will be shitpie'd oneday or another. just call me a nigger and get it over with. i'd rather for a man to say what he really feels than to play teenage
games with me,see in my life time i've been called nigger,colored,afro-american,coon,boy. and now i'm black. like i told you before i like the damn lyric. but you just took shit the wrong way.you aint nothing but a niggling i know you dont know what it mean. so i'm going to tell you. it means trifling,piddling,inconsequential,measly