Brandy_n_Cali
on Tear-Stained Pages by TLRufener
4 Sep 2004, 12:03 AM
nice poem!
BEAUTIFUL!! I THINK THAT THE WORDS THAT U USED WERE VERY DESCRIPTIVE, I REALLY LIKE THIS!!!
<Begin simile>
<Shoehorne in as many ill-conceived war references as possible>
<Continue for a bit longer>
<Oh wait, got another one>
<There we go>
<Finish>
Hey Sasha, long time. I really enjoyed this one, Brings memories to mind that almost make me cry. Just what I needed after last night. Thanks.
That story should never end, then what would us simple poets write about?
No, no I don't. But I still desire that all-encompassing love. But if I don't find it I will still love my life. If I can't find someone to give everything I am, I will give to everyone, that is the nature of the beast. Love ya babe.
Well done. WELL DONE! need I say more?
I think you should sleep on this and hit it again, it begs for more.
I don't think he's lost, just misplaced. If he holds the key to your freedom, you are going with him.
Keep fighting. It's all about how you deal with the situations you are presented with in life. And, no matter how bad it is, it's never worth suicide!
Druid? I've always been entranced by the idea of Stonehenge, So, my thoughts exactly.
really really cool
Well written, this deserves a place somewhere above all the others, at least for a time. I believe you find peace in a chapel because your soul, which makes you who you are, feels more at home there than in this chaotic world. Just a thought.
YES!! Very much so. Read my poem The Message(revised).
That is my attempt to discribe camping in these beautiful rocky mountains. Kinda.I got sidetracked.
GREAT!!
Did he have to die?
Waiting for you to vote on something. Anything. Then I'll give you a vote on this.
Out of your league is she? Keep trying will you? So nice of her to leave a small part. A sad comedy how we keep at these passions, not made for solitude. Good.
Good message, it seems to flow well. How's life in Australia? I've always wanted to go.