nice

Quite nice...brings back memories. -8-

A bit jagged but very good. -8-

You still suck!!!!

apperently i can edit and comment on this while loged out, but not when loged in, how did you post?

"Stroking his brows of sandy shade, that earliest smoothness with mustache and hair graying." The poem starts here for me. "A belief, a certainty?" Everything you are trying to say in the first 2 1/2 lines should be told in this line. Love the last stanza. But criticism aside. It's a -10- as is.

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wow that was easyer than i was expecting... just log out before you post..... this is kinda interisting... ---sir heff

i wrote this with my g/f, she wrote the first line, i did the second and so on... she thinks i f*cked the ending up...

Wow. You can edit my posts without logging in. How cool.

dig it

Big deal

Almost all the trees cut for pulp and paper are grown on farms. To say we should save a tree by using less paper is like saying we should eat less corn.

I like "hyperactive serpent on a sibilant slither." A bit strange in spacing and language at the end though.

Good rant.

You are too funny sometimes. Did someone make you angry regarding your firewood business?

I think my seven year old wrote this????

Well, it appears that two of my poems have made their way to Arduinn's favorites list. To what do I owe this fine pleasure? thank you for the compliment!

The hath just doesn't seem to fit.Replace him with her and I may as well have written this one.

Good poem Bratsy. If more people prayed to the Blessed Virgin for her intercession, this world might not be such a mess.