Re: No Worries by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:31 AM
Surely, indeed.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:36 AM
Wait a minute. Surely the person you're addressing has some other praiseworthy feature besides beauty (ie, making him/her more worthy of praise than the reflection). Then it all goes downhill from there.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:42 AM
Hey, welcome to poemranker! You don't need to post explanations for your poems. Seriously.
Re: pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:47 AM
1) Are you on The O.C.? 2) Are you reading The Da Vinci Code?
Re: WHY DAD?WHY? by RION12	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:47 AM
You should travel back in time 15 years and start a grunge band.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:49 AM
Great, YOUR ancestors probably lived in Spain more recently than hers did.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.8.105	20-Mar-05/6:55 AM
Writing a strong emotion in a way that people unfamiliar with the situation can relate to is a difficult task. I usually fail unless some burst of inspiration relates the situation and my feelings about it in a unique way - something that pulls them in, hooks them, draws up their own supressed feelings. Good try. I doubt if I could do better.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	INTRANSIT 4.159.212.243	20-Mar-05/4:24 PM
i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
Re: A good little poem by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.4.183	21-Mar-05/6:46 AM
Do you really need (bread) after "rye" and "possibilities" after infomercial. You did say it's a little poem. Thoughts turn rye is good. Why not infomercials piclke?
Re: A good little poem by INTRANSIT	edpeterson 68.79.58.40	21-Mar-05/6:49 AM
good to hear you won't be needing that viagra regimen afterall.
Re: Rusty knife to the kidney by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.4.183	21-Mar-05/6:51 AM
I liked it better before, but still good.
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	Dovina 12.72.4.183	21-Mar-05/6:56 AM
Can we have some of you happy athiests speak out in rebuttal?
Re: L.O.V.E. by bxjay170	christic1978 205.188.116.139	21-Mar-05/12:10 PM
its really sincere, but you need to check over your work for missing words and such before submitting.
Re: pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	21-Mar-05/3:05 PM
hello this is the person who you commented on about eat what you want. first of all, this may be the worst poem i have ever read in my entire life. you should try wrestling instead. oh, and your name is gay. thanks! i gave you a 0. hahahahahaha
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	edpeterson 68.79.58.40	21-Mar-05/6:15 PM
Yahhh, Vee believes in nuhsink, Lebowski. You sink vee are kidding und making mit da funny schtuff?
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	edpeterson 68.79.58.40	21-Mar-05/6:17 PM
Do you mean that you could care less, or that you couldn't care less? If it is the former, why not say, "I could care more?"
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	edpeterson 68.79.58.40	21-Mar-05/6:17 PM
Have you really been looking?
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	edpeterson 68.79.58.40	21-Mar-05/6:23 PM
Do you think it is possible for one to be an atheist, and believe in something? Please think about what the word "atheist" means prior to answering. Thank you. What is an aethiest? Does it have anything to do with aether? Do you think you have been hard pressed, or have you actually been hard pressed? How could you not be sure?
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	Tintagiles 142.166.250.184	21-Mar-05/8:29 PM
It's a pity that you could care less, as that proves (as does the poeme, really) that you do care at least a little. What is it with all these idiots who use that stupidly bastardised form of a perfectly sensible phrase to accidentally express precisely the opposite of what they actually mean? Especially putative poets, who ought to have at least a little sensitivity to language?
Re: will you? by Sapphire	tadpole 24.55.116.186	21-Mar-05/8:51 PM
I like the last line, and a lot of the rest of it too. I think it could flow a lot better though.