Geeku!!! Geekliscious.

caressed. Plus, it'd be a lot better if you said "towelheads". Headtowels sound very gay.

Oh - My - Fucking - God... You are so fucking emo that it makes me want to barf... just go ahead and kill yourself you pathetic fuck. PLEASE????

You suck emo boy... maybe that's what she got tired of, you know, the unstable sensitivity? EH? Maybe she wanted a guy with like, balls? Yeah, a tougher sort of guy who won't cry and be gentle when he fucks her. The sort of guy who'll grab her ass in a rough manner and ram his rod with a viciousness to match her wanting while talking dirty, calling her a little fucking WHORE.

Shut up and slit your wrists already, loser.

Idealistic Emo Goo is what killed your relationship, you sad little bitch boi!!! Now stop loving and go masturbate with a razor.

swollow - SWALLOW....FUCK MAN. Can't you fucking use spellcheck.net? Your writing is fucking gay... even gayer is that you just vote for yourself... you know what? Zero bomb time. I've just fucking had it with morons like you.

Sorry, I forgto to vote.

that was a remarkable poem At once I read it it was gentle and plain unwavering under whose cautious hand against the the known intention in any hand it was full of feelings that flow from line to another to form the shape in the breast of the man

great political poem, i really have nothing negative to say about the poem itself, very lyrical and memorable, from the seagulls to the seeds to the chosen people. i disagree completely with the premise, however. There are many, many, many arab countries, and only one Israel. The great irony is that the two sides in conflict have much more in common with each other than with any of the outside forces, both arab and western, all of whom want to manipulate the situation for their own gain, not to help the innocents caught in the middle.

Oh, Btw FAGGOT: Your no longer on the best list. ;) Fucking loser.

Chemistry is cool when you learn it on your own... bathtub intoxicants are the cure for a dull soul!!!

um... Genius? I'm not sure. No vote at this time.

It comes off as cliche. I think you can do better.

"and pluck the grapes for to drink my own cup my own handful of cherry red sweet wine." I suggest: and pluck the grapes for my own cup of red sweet wine." Also check punctuation, capitalize the I's, etc. Aside from all that, not bad... Think the title could be better though.

incense.

Are you fucking my wife? Of course not, it's just that the mood of this poem is familiar.

Right, either age has wittled the Angel's skill to the crusty husk of a brittle old flange or the original angel handed over their details to a new angel who is simply dunce. -=10=-

I love the rhythm of this poem;it creates suspense. I would,however,use a different verb than 'fling'. Give more power to the co-subject of the poem with something like 'spring'. Other than that small nuance, the imagery is superbly emotive---I give you a 10!Keep writing!

Over the horizon still some hopes will be found but at the end of the horizon will sink in darkness until dawn over the horizon slowly breaking into the far distance it finds the way to lit my heart again fill me light but soon the light's getting dark it starts all over again ..this is transient hope over the horizon ..I see things in my own poin of view ...urs are good too I like it ...thanx dude