Re: Ladybirds and Monsters by Caducus	dvincent 71.109.99.231	12-May-08/6:48 PM
I don't understand this poem, but I like it. It has a uniqueness and a lyrical quality that makes it stand out from the crowd. Good work!
Re: Ladybirds and Monsters by Caducus	dvincent 71.109.99.231	12-May-08/6:49 PM
Sorry, I forgto to vote.
Re: 5 Point Something on the Richter Scale by jessicazee	Prince of Void 77.237.72.128	17-May-08/12:10 PM
that was a remarkable poem At once I read it it was gentle and plain unwavering under whose cautious hand against the the known intention in any hand it was full of feelings that flow from line to another to form the shape in the breast of the man
regarding some deleted poem...	nypoet22 65.9.139.213	27-May-08/8:29 PM
great political poem, i really have nothing negative to say about the poem itself, very lyrical and memorable, from the seagulls to the seeds to the chosen people. i disagree completely with the premise, however. There are many, many, many arab countries, and only one Israel. The great irony is that the two sides in conflict have much more in common with each other than with any of the outside forces, both arab and western, all of whom want to manipulate the situation for their own gain, not to help the innocents caught in the middle.
Re: Modern Stupidity by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:06 PM
Geeku!!! Geekliscious.
Re: Because of me by dark wiccan	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:12 PM
Oh - My - Fucking - God... You are so fucking emo that it makes me want to barf... just go ahead and kill yourself you pathetic fuck. PLEASE????
Re: Memories by dark wiccan	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:16 PM
You suck emo boy... maybe that's what she got tired of, you know, the unstable sensitivity? EH? Maybe she wanted a guy with like, balls? Yeah, a tougher sort of guy who won't cry and be gentle when he fucks her. The sort of guy who'll grab her ass in a rough manner and ram his rod with a viciousness to match her wanting while talking dirty, calling her a little fucking WHORE.
Re: Why should i care to be here by dark wiccan	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:18 PM
Shut up and slit your wrists already, loser.
Re: Love by dark wiccan	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:19 PM
Idealistic Emo Goo is what killed your relationship, you sad little bitch boi!!! Now stop loving and go masturbate with a razor.
Re: Sim Saladin by bonjoo	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:22 PM
caressed. Plus, it'd be a lot better if you said "towelheads". Headtowels sound very gay.
Re: In All My Dreams by forsaken	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:24 PM
swollow - SWALLOW....FUCK MAN. Can't you fucking use spellcheck.net? Your writing is fucking gay... even gayer is that you just vote for yourself... you know what? Zero bomb time. I've just fucking had it with morons like you.
Re: In All My Dreams by forsaken	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:33 PM
Oh, Btw FAGGOT: Your no longer on the best list. ;) Fucking loser.
Re: Fuck stupid chemistry labs by jauser	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:25 PM
Chemistry is cool when you learn it on your own... bathtub intoxicants are the cure for a dull soul!!!
Re: sperladnik by malpaso	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:26 PM
um... Genius? I'm not sure. No vote at this time.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:29 PM
It comes off as cliche. I think you can do better.
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:33 PM
"and pluck the grapes for to drink my own cup my own handful of cherry red sweet wine." I suggest: and pluck the grapes for my own cup of red sweet wine." Also check punctuation, capitalize the I's, etc. Aside from all that, not bad... Think the title could be better though.
Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:35 PM
incense.
Re: Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer	Dan garcia-Black 69.239.240.37	31-May-08/2:44 PM
Are you fucking my wife? Of course not, it's just that the mood of this poem is familiar.
Re: The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 90.201.195.61	4-Jun-08/12:28 PM
Right, either age has wittled the Angel's skill to the crusty husk of a brittle old flange or the original angel handed over their details to a new angel who is simply dunce. -=10=-
regarding some deleted poem...	malpaso 70.233.152.145	5-Jun-08/7:24 AM
I love the rhythm of this poem;it creates suspense. I would,however,use a different verb than 'fling'. Give more power to the co-subject of the poem with something like 'spring'. Other than that small nuance, the imagery is superbly emotive---I give you a 10!Keep writing!