Re: The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	16-May-05/9:22 AM
You owe me two bucks for using my Rabbit hole. I'll take a discount on your book.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	Niphredil 132.68.1.29	16-May-05/10:18 AM
It touched me. I think it is a beautiful poem.
Re: The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.141	16-May-05/11:32 AM
Alice, there are many who await you in earnest in the depths of this chaotic rabbit hole. You need not a partner, all is good and safe... if thou art a madman ofcourse.
Re: Bookends by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:38 PM
Clever!
Re: Old Lady and The Sea by Joe-joe	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:43 PM
I want to think this is about an old woman. I guess I can if I want. And for that a 9.
Re: Complex Composition by al-naafiysh	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:50 PM
This is quite good and a situation I can relate to. It's nice to be with someone who is "afraid of me intellectually," but nicer to banter with someone as an equal or where I'm slightly inferior. Don't worry about rockmage. When he gives you a 5, he likes your work.
Re: I want to know what a lifes like.... by Damien	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/12:54 PM
This looks like a response to someone who said, "Get a life." Maybe you should change the title to that.
Re: dit da haiku by nentwined	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/1:08 PM
You're doing a great job with Poemranker, but if you expect a crowd-joining high vote for this, think again.
Re: Meters of my destiny by Bhuwan	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/1:10 PM
You're kidding?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.32.185	16-May-05/2:39 PM
You're insane. They cannot all be your best friend. I think it's the mollusc (mollusk).
Re: Bookends by INTRANSIT	Dental Panic 84.31.86.195	16-May-05/3:13 PM
I'm not going to vote on poetry, ever - but I like this one. It's a bit hypographic and you should buy O'Hara.
Re: wretched by Dental Panic	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	16-May-05/3:34 PM
Judging by the quality of the poem, I'd say the only defect is the title. Welcome. keep your head about you. Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
Re: Mother by Jeremi B. Handrinos	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/4:27 PM
It has been awhile since last I read your work or even checked the ranker, and it looks like your style has evolved/changed quite a bit.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/5:01 PM
You are a child, a sad, foolish one who seeketh another to appease the ego, a harlot that causes thee to forget thy shadow-- it is but short lived, and savagely ended, from which you shall despair again in darkness, in the absence of the light that must be born within. You'll most likely think, "What the fuck ever."; but then again, it's all humor and black pearls of charity to me.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/5:11 PM
And if she/he does not take notice? Or if they do, but are solitary to a wicked and bitter degree, and silence you? What then. "Save me! Save me!" You know what most people say? They recite eminem: "I can't be your superman..."
Re: Fate by Fayt	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/5:13 PM
Fuck fate, manifest your own destiny and steal the devils luck.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.40	16-May-05/5:45 PM
Social Taboo- Fine by me. I'm not horrified. Cliched Plot- Forgivable since it's a well written piece, despite the crudely placed line-breaks. But that crap about Indian statues (erm, native american pseudo totem poles) in front of barbershops? You happen to be getting your American culture 101 from back issues of 'Yankee Life'? For your information, there is usually a twirly candycane poll in front of barbershops. This, I believe is a old trick: its candycane appearence makes little girls think it's a candy store, and so they happily follow mummy to a close enough distance to the door-- where then mummy can easily drag her in and demand the barber to slice off the childs' wild, waist-length curls. Afterwards, mummy takes a photo to capture the horrid memory of the lil girls first haircut... Precious, isn't it? ;)
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	16-May-05/5:55 PM
Come on; honor me at least with a 4 for the fifth line
Re: Sins of convenience by sunset sky	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.166	16-May-05/6:19 PM
I'm reminded of my mother. And of my father.. and again of the circumstances of their polar coupling. VileCandyMeLikesAndFears. Lick, nibble, withdraw, consume with passionate gluttony.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72	16-May-05/6:35 PM
You forgot -spiff.