| Re: Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT |
SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.166 |
16-May-05/6:45 PM |
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This one my friend stumbles, and stuggles to fit the form. That, and also one is left wondering: "what is the meaning or signifigance of the desert plant agave?"
Be blessed by the angels of seven.
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| Re: dit da haiku by nentwined |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72 |
16-May-05/7:04 PM |
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glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
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| Re: I sat beside the night by Niphredil |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.72 |
16-May-05/7:15 PM |
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I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
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Hallmark 129.12.235.73 |
16-May-05/8:36 PM |
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hate the third line
don't like much of it actually
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| Re: Mid Years by Dovina |
Hallmark 129.12.235.73 |
16-May-05/8:44 PM |
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the fogginess of penile dementia!
a superbeflous line
as are all the others
3 point 1 point 2 point 1 point 5
jesus woman!
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Hallmark 129.12.235.73 |
16-May-05/8:46 PM |
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i caught me a feekin bottom feeder!
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| Re: Nesting Instinct of Women by Dovina |
Hallmark 129.12.235.73 |
16-May-05/9:16 PM |
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The first paragraph suggests to me that the female is a school girl at an all girls school.
the second that she fears, fears, fears to leave this state, but also wants to.
The third that she can go back to the school
What have i done wrong?
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| Re: Learning to Drive by jessicazee |
Hallmark 129.12.235.73 |
16-May-05/10:34 PM |
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I don't understand poetry very much could you explian. I I don't understand this: Our driver's Ed was private
i'm not sure about the caulking bit either as this brings to mind prehistoric ships to me.
can you help?
I'm trying to learn
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| Re: Get well soon by Hallmark |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/12:54 AM |
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| Re: Mucusly by Hallmark |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/12:55 AM |
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| Re: Yuletide by Hallmark |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/12:55 AM |
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Very, very, very good. Bordering on "excellent". -1-
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| Re: Anniversary by Hallmark |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/12:56 AM |
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Is this poeme about bumsex? Are you some sort of bummersexualist?
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| Re: Valantine by Hallmark |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/1:00 AM |
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I fisted your Gran and broke her spine
I burnt your Princess Diana shrine
I ripped up your favourite golden gown
Your ever loving Courtney Pine, Top Jazz Saxophonist
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wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/4:57 AM |
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I will comment on the poem. The poem is gay. I will now comment on the author. The author is a gaylord.
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wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
17-May-05/5:01 AM |
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| Re: Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
zodiac 212.118.19.32 |
17-May-05/5:54 AM |
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'genes' should be 'jeans' or 'them'.
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| Re: Bookends by INTRANSIT |
zodiac 212.118.19.32 |
17-May-05/6:02 AM |
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"genious" is genius. I hope it was on purpose.
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| Re: Forever by Dovina |
zodiac 212.118.19.32 |
17-May-05/6:12 AM |
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Do you really see a distinction between "Long live the king" and "May the king live forever"? What? I mean, I know you say one is what people who like the king shout, and the other is what people who love the king shout, but really.
Maybe you need another traditional thing for shouting at people. Here are some Arabic ones:
"God save you from the fire!"
"May you never taste spicy food!"
"God willing, you will shit oil!"
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| Re: Learning to Drive by jessicazee |
INTRANSIT 64.12.116.197 |
17-May-05/12:00 PM |
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But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
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| Re: Get well soon by Hallmark |
INTRANSIT 64.12.116.197 |
17-May-05/12:13 PM |
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