zodiac
on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT
17 May 2005, 5:54 AM
'genes' should be 'jeans' or 'them'.
I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
I don't understand poetry very much could you explian. I I don't understand this: Our driver's Ed was private
i'm not sure about the caulking bit either as this brings to mind prehistoric ships to me.
can you help?
I'm trying to learn
This one my friend stumbles, and stuggles to fit the form. That, and also one is left wondering: "what is the meaning or signifigance of the desert plant agave?"
Be blessed by the angels of seven.
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
hate the third line
don't like much of it actually
i caught me a feekin bottom feeder!
But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
The first paragraph suggests to me that the female is a school girl at an all girls school.
the second that she fears, fears, fears to leave this state, but also wants to.
The third that she can go back to the school
What have i done wrong?
Your clearly a gaylord
Your a dicksplat
Very, very, very good. Bordering on "excellent". -1-
Is this poeme about bumsex? Are you some sort of bummersexualist?
I fisted your Gran and broke her spine
I burnt your Princess Diana shrine
I ripped up your favourite golden gown
Your ever loving Courtney Pine, Top Jazz Saxophonist
I will comment on the poem. The poem is gay. I will now comment on the author. The author is a gaylord.
Gufftastic. -5-
Do you really see a distinction between "Long live the king" and "May the king live forever"? What? I mean, I know you say one is what people who like the king shout, and the other is what people who love the king shout, but really.
Maybe you need another traditional thing for shouting at people. Here are some Arabic ones:
"God save you from the fire!"
"May you never taste spicy food!"
"God willing, you will shit oil!"
OREGANO!!!