Edna Sweetlove
on Hunger 2 by Dovina
20 May 2006, 4:51 PM
fabulously unfunny.
Infantile. Embarrassing.
Quite camp.
Better than the last two, but not much. Very whiney.
Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.
Not very good rhyming or rhythm or anything much really.
A puss is cat, dear. What you mean is "pus". 0/10
At least there's no major grammar mistakes. Not much humour either.
I can't believe how bad your spelling is.
Appalling.
Your spelling doesn't improve does it? Unusual rhymes.
How true. How true.
You could do with a few apostrophes in the right places.
The bit about the nail in the foot is very funny and deserves 10/10; but the rest is pretty dire.
This is quite funny. I would have given it 9/10 if it had not been for the dreadful punctuation and grammar. What a pity humour is wrecked by educational ignorance. Thus: 3/10 instead, but try harder.
The cookies were not baked
They were given to you cold
With the booger taste, it, you could not rank
All you wanted was it to be baked by a trippy skank.
What is a trippy skank, dearie?
"Obsurd" is totally hilarious! 0/10
Puerile drivel.
You are well-named.
wot iz this deer? U Kannut spel 2 gud