ramtheman1
on The Real You by venusdemilo
18 Oct 2003, 1:49 AM
nice
it has a nice shpe.
I'm starting to get cross-eyed. Lovers.
Never saw a purple sunset. Tis another song.
L2-pushed to the side to vanishes....?????
L(-I desirer from you...desire?
Very good self pity. I don't understand line 2. Sorry!
I'm about to use a spanky to wipe up your silly ass. Ms? Ms? Are you trying to piss me off? I'm a woman Like youre gay. (hope yer not a fag)Still, 5
Let me know what you think of this poem.
this was written just after my mothr passed away.
i was have a bad ahir day.
i miss my family that live in another state but we are still pretty close.
was written for the upcoming holiday. to sort of scare the reader in fun.
nicely written
strange poem
i like this poem.
isn't there another verse almost like this one already written?
what are you trying to portray?
not nice
i agree
no way
OnTheOtherHand
on You must enter a title for your poem about lebsians! by OnTheOtherHand
18 Oct 2003, 2:45 AM
Working title of course.