Good job honey, very personal and a lot of meaning. I hope you keep it up.. who knows where this stuff might take ya :)

Good poem, i honestly Did NOT know you had a poem called confusion too.. i am not copying you, maybe we are on the same brain wave...?

Fabulous!.... 10/10

I like this one the best... 10/10

hahahahahahahahahaha good poem good poem

Oh yeah i remember this one.... this one's great... ^.^

Can't you write a poeme about something that isn't the amazing, magical thing you think of your life as?

I love your poem, a very good job. Deep thinking as well.

Great use of Polish in refrence to the Pope!

"-over" should be 'ever'.

A mocumentary

I like-f-words. ffffffERRET!! fffffffffffAScinATE!!! and my ffffffAVORITE, FFFFFFREDERICK Rigglesmeyer FFFFFFFFFFFFFRIFFFFFFLESCHMIDT!!!!

Defitely put me into the moment. At first I was reluctant to read the thing, cuz it looked huge; in fact I was just going to type "just wanted you to know I'm working on it - notes to follow" - but I got sucked in. Now I want to go to china and stand up like a post.

A perfect moment for bedazzling drug use. Used, naturally, as a smoke screen. lol.

Jesus put me here.

cool wordplay

a nice flow of conciousness with some interesting allusions (you don't see "Septuagint" everyday). Not sure if you intended to use the apt "liquid lies" twice though. "over" works just fine, btw.

Well done.

persistant questions, and I appreciate the controlled structure.

yowee. I apologize for the previous comment--now, a month and a half later, I come back to this, and it strikes me as very, very "good". It's just a month and a half too old for me, that's all. :)