titan69
on Kiss Me by josiefiend
1 Nov 2003, 11:34 AM
know change kiss for fuck!!
thats better.
YOU SHOULD READ MY POEM SEX WITH A WOOLY SHEEP
KNOW THAT IS GROSS.
I also like getting inside
Does not do it.
Like the boots and hairflick thingy. 23.657
This seems more silly than ironic. Still it is well written.
Like a good bowel movement?
nope
Evidently with so many questions,,, not good.
Love the way you lose all the discipline at the end and just blurt out what a twisted wizard he is.
Fine depiction of repression
Seems a good last thing to me. 22.4431
Chase that tail, doggy! 21.5665
Just cause you tried!
Gosh have you considered getting in touch with Dead Ringers, or perhaps you could resurect Spitting Image. Its quite simply uncanny. Do you look at all like him?
Best poem about a carriage clock i've ever seen. I always lose the winding key ass well!!!!
Vituperative is right in keeping with the tone of any sports event. Well done!!!!!
Also well done for Starring out that nigger. Nigger is such an offencive word isn't it. If more people printed Nigger as you have and the word nigger was not written in its hateful entirety perhaps racial tensions would be soothed and we could all live together in harmony. Ebony & Bl******s ass'twer!!! The Tabloid press in England do a similar thing in their papers and i can tell you its led to a real change in peoples language and attitudes!!!
Nigger
Yes good, the only thing that sticks out as problematic is the use of the word 'aura' which I think lacks a certain precision.
I explod my firework all the time !!
And ilight my own fuse?
On a hot summers night would you offer your throat to
the wolf with the red roses!!!!!