hehehe that's what i keep tellin em I need!!!! Well here... I don't got no sleepin aids... but if u take some dayquil pill thingies.... it'll put ur mood up there... hehehehehehehehe (lol)

Good poem, missy :) And as Sliver said, my the candle never go out. And may we continue to be able to nauseate Dark Angel ;) lol j/k

Those who are rejecting and disapproving your poem could in no way possibly be seeing it from your point of view, lil miss bratsy. Keep it up.

I remember when u sent this one to me. Remember to tell me when you post another one so I can come and see it :)

hehe yeah me and bratsy were workin on hers the other night... notta clue. Good poem :)

Good Job Electroman, I like this one. And my dad would LOVE this one. I am a Christian, but I am not a catholic... but I won't argue any of your viewpoints... I agree to disagree :)

lol im running out of comments to give u people! But good job.

Well if that's just "added" emotion...umm.. you're good at adding emotion lol

You have a way with words, don't you.

Cool. Short poems with a clear emotion

dip me in dogshit

Whooo whoo, nice!

Thank you! :)

whoa, good poem!

heh I can relate! Very nice.

its a purty cool thing to behold. jan and dean, the everly brothers, abbot and costello? but I don't know pearl and ted. Interesting.

At first I got nothing out of it... but then I found that I was wondering what it was you were describing so I must have liked it ^.^

Naw, I've already been fitted with a pumpkin

Jeremi (baba/bachus/horus/shardik) - Functionally its a fairly pulling read (though, ironically, I was zoning out right around the park where you refer to Americans as lazy half-asses; go figure). Not any new angles here though, is there? And the premise of rallying a group to action by name-calling is flawed. As a vent though - I can feel your pain. But as an argument, you could add credibility to this if you backed up your claims with some statistics, references and specific examples, like for: "America holds the largest collection of undereducated" (percentages compared to world?), "two thirds of its occupants still believe the earth was created a couple thousand years ago" (a reference would be nice here), "Simple, it's the inability to lead by example and keep your word." (examples), "now through karma we are getting our fair dues?" - (what is this referring to, exactly, casinos?)", "common knowledge that Americans are greedy, narrow sighted, and ridiculously pretentious without fair reason or even an objective" (references? even something anectdotal would help) If its just rant, then fine, carry on - but if you want to make a compelling argument then make it sound like you did your homework.

I laughed, I cried, you moved me Bob.