Good. I always say, "Milk a cow and you have drink for a day. Milk a bull and you have a friend for life."

INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great

How about Sancho Panzas puberty... for the untitled heh,heh.Don I'am encantada que leiste mi poema, si es verdad sobre el tema 8 que lo de la harmonica quizas le falta practica, pero es uno de mis bebe's.And has alot of potential please, you are invited to continue giving me tips and bettering my poetry. how about the sonnata of the windmills..Thank you.Ciao bello!.

If life is a box of chocolates make mine Godiva dahlin. This piece is unique I like it Iam true to my selve's a wink from all of us. Chucles and giggles. I crown you with a 10!

Isolation didn't make me happy. Leaving my house and strolling in san fran for 5 days did wonders though. Blessed with seven.

I don't know why you went lyric with this it's a fine poem, though bumpy in spots. Old tip. Read it aloud or have someone read it to you, the bumps will pop up like a weed through pavement. My archives are all back, take a peek at The catamaran. and......

Sounds like somebody cut you off on the Grand Central Parkway! Yeah some of what goes on in this city sucks but, to be honest with you, I've lived here all my life and desire to live no other place in the world. While it is true that NYC often reveals the worst possible human qualities it is also is loaded with great people doing great things every day. Unfortunately these people and their stories don't get much press so we are left only with the type of stereotype so elegantly reflected in your poem. By the way. Lady Liberty does not collect patina....she undergoes a thorough washing every six months.

I hope you wrote a tell all letter and placed it in a location where it could be easily found.....otherwise I would not count on seeing that epitaph any time in the foreseeable future.......

Now this is poetry. -not sure what sickle cleaves sky means, nor what tamarisks are.

Um, refreshing?

YES!!

Been there. You make a great stone soup.

Real.

actions speak better than words. always have. always will. And I have now rendered all poetry, moot.

Mrs. Hare, First of all, my apologies if you are not a Mrs. Secondly, I have re-vamped the intersection poem and would appreciate your thoughts on it. If you would like my thoughts on -Reap-, I will be happy to oblige. Thank you for your time. intransit.

I like the jist of it . . . 9

I said the same thing when I was thirteen? And realized that it's much more complicated than that. blessed with 6.

sickle & red eye.. quite a read- calm yet billowy, with well placed meaning. Yup, its a winner alright. Blessed with 10.

pretty cool

whoa! love it