some deleted user
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2003, 3:32 PM
I like it, nice!
Very moving stuff. 9.
I feel so inadequate now to speak of Mr. Haiku.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.
Blessed with 10.
The hand that kills is mustard.
The hand that saves is mustard.
so wear this zero with pride.
Haiku? Who cares it shines like snow man ....10 and a personal favourite of mine.
Me? Bumping into a Voodoo Priest changed everything.
baby-shit
hooollldin' onn for Jeeesuss....i can practically hear the music
thanx.
Letting go for Jesu, though I'm no Jew (Beeric) by No one (Free verse) by horus8
I aint no couchey comfort eagle
And I aint no swingin' chunk o sac
Got my fair share of poetic doubles
And now there's no turning back
Thought I'd learnt from my previous swan dives
that the Lord takes his spuds with sour cream & chives
And when I needed my friends to pay?
They said "You have AIDS, and you are gay".
So I jumped anyway like Wile E. Coyote.
Another whitey on display, trippin' on peyote
stuffed Frioles.
But I'm letting go for Jesu
We're gonna smoke da kind bowl
Yeah I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna get catty on my pole.
When life has got your number
And you're livin' in the gutter
Then welcome to my world, Scutter (Like in Carnivale)
It ain't all spread out with duck butter
Billy Jean streets is all you'll get
And all you gotta do is go Chet (Like in Weird Science)
'cos when life knocks you up, brother
You don't always pull a Pink Panther
and fuck a 'sick' transexual belly dancer.
But I'm letting go for a Jesu
He's gonna keep me real sane
Yeah I'm letting go for your Jesu
and all his rocked up cocaine.
Well I found myself in cheap whiskey
And I held myself on piped smack
Knew I'd hit top drawer, oh baby
Though I'd lost my favourite Hackey Sackey
But I opened up my beef heart to you
Turned over a brand new dark sheet
I dedicate my life, Jesu
My art, my heart, my feet
Feet cleaning is what you do.
that's why I fell in love with you.
Yeah, I'm letting go for Jesu
He's gonna scrape my last bowl
Yeah I'm holding on for Jesu
He's gonna save my soul
He's gonna stoke my coal
He's worth the big let go
Ask little Joe from KOKOMO
and the dragonless from Komodo.
Been there.
ditto
Liked the Picasso reference in S1 and the unrelenting mood of violence you have created, makes me want to kill the bastard.
Good stuff
I've been checking your vote archives and from what i see, someone is zeroing you out of petty revenge.
At least I know your better than that.
L3 makes this ! 8
swell
says what a haiku does , a haiku about a haiku - novel idea 7
Some nice imagery but overlong 6