Hmm. I've never really felt love, and I thought that was painful, the DESIRE. But I've never had a broken jaw.Owww

LIGHT.

cool

what the hell is this?

????rrrriiiiggghhhttttt.....

HA...HA...

::applauds:: By far the most creative...10! Lol.

Where did you stick the carrot?

nefarb

so true!!

I realy like this. Any thing to do with wolves is ok with me

shut up you grammar nob ed! This pome made me hard?

A steaming turd just bristling with activity.

Could you perhaps tear the windows and shatter the cloth so as not to be so excruciatingly boring next time? God, you would think you'd get sick of the cliche for a while and grow some balls of originality.

So your saying don't run away? Jog in? walk within? Do the homeless have a harmonica or a quartet around a burn barrel?

I like how you used slyly and sly in the same poem with a fox to describe a wolf? Pumagirl!!! yay for you! This is hardly an ode? there's no indians, no game tax, no wolf boots? what kind of poet are you? This is a chode to lemurs if anything.

Note to self:- 'You would do well to pay attention to the confusion engendered by your poetry and even your attempts at clarification. This and your previous poems show that you have an ability to come up with striking images and metaphors from time to time, but they always get lost in grammar/syntax that is simply poor, and a linguistic style that is bafflingly alien and makes me wonder if English is a second language for you. Given the unclear quality of your "clarification," I would suggest a grounding in basic communication prior to moving on to advanced endeavors such as poetry.'

The laughing gnome fallen victim to an axe attack.

LSD?! pink, orange, gold, amber. Not bad but I have never seen midnight grey, and the midnight is already blue so there is not need to mention violet skies (a bit of a colour clash too).

Note to myself: Jan 9th, good for humor, bad for giving money and silent prayers to underpriveleged persons. ha.