titan69
on Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8
26 Jan 2004, 1:38 PM
are you all mad ITS SHIT!!!!!!!!
Beter not say to much might up set nobby agane
Rather BLEEK.
I would do if you didnt look like an ape?
Just kidding 9/10
yeah whatever. And my buddy Bob has a god, the Glorious Jenny, who is a 4 billion year old vagina that is the size of a galaxy and has a yeast infection, and if you don't believe in her you have to spend a billion years in the Twat of Punishment.
A religion that actually had any intrinsic value would not need to try to frighten people into believing.
you will burn in hell for blaspheming the born-again bob, you infidel goat.
Stoic.
Somewhere in the distance, squatters in a river, are washing napkins for the lord of the manor, beating the socks on the rocks to afford retainers. while their children splash ecoli and dream of saucing an eggroll.
This totally works for me, just as it is. But they booted me out of Eratosphere.
All the mathematics and crude jokes in the world will never make you bob dylan.
I suggest you take your place in the commoners roome!!!
BTW, Mr andrewjthomas, do you really think that your piss poem is better than mine???
Have you seen "The Fog"? (This is where dark bagel comes along and goes "I am fog!!! blargh!" and then toots the horn on the side of his ass wagon).
The passage "while this deconstruction of residential
zoning half-burnt brick and mortar shell shining," doesn't form a clause. What happens "while"? I would understand if you meant for it to be like that, with the abruptness of "rebuild" and all, but if not it needs a verb. I would also take the "sweet" out of "sweet train wreck" and even (really controlling unsolicited advice here) drop the "and" from the beginning of that line and the "The" before sirens. It's really good otherwise. Don't think I criticized so much because I don't like it. You'll see I'm harder on the good ones.
This should be a pimple, I think.
"Many tears, she shall shed,"
When the rankers all have read
This same trite stuff as all your others
On breaks from shagging their own mothers.
Pan handler.
Hey, Why are so many readers here HATERS? I like your work...do you have a personal site? I can show u how 2 get a free one to post your stuff on....E
a tampon with wings? Anatomically impossible!
If you soak a pretzel in urine for five hours it will swell and taste nasty.
Some good stuff in here. Please do a little bonsai with it. You intrigued me, but by the end I no longer gave a fuck what you were tired of. Just post the pome, not the whole worksheet for the pome.
This is one of the best poemes on poemeranker.