Re: I Hate Andy Jeon by JoyLuck	13-May-04/1:06 PM
bad ascii art is forbidden.
Re: Invisible Poo by kthay	13-May-04/1:05 PM
Bow'ls
Re: Ze German Poetry by Stephen Robins	13-May-04/1:02 PM
I sink zat you vould be better usingg ze S for ze th sound at ze end off "youth"
Re: By Now by Lie2MePinnochio	13-May-04/12:59 PM
I like gnarly.
Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/8:01 PM
Ouch I felt that all the way over here. Actually I'm just underslept, but I don't think I'm grouchy. zodiac, I'm insanely curious about something: You praise my translation of Ne me Quitte Pas but subsequently and inexplicably refer to me as inexperienced. Why?
Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/6:11 PM
I'd suggest the poetry of John F. Nims as a way to increase your vocabulary and cerebral space.
Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/4:45 PM
Easy to answer: Less cliché, more original
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-May-04/3:49 PM
jesus
Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/2:38 PM
This is a lot better! Is this an old one or a new one?
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:55 PM
Again, I'm not the one who introduced bow'ls to the site. Most of the people who post regularly here (including yourself) say things that most normal people would consider immature. For example, it's hardly mature to talk about "steaming cornucopiæ of bow'ls" even with respect to philosophy.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:50 PM
Ok, how about this: You're doing exactly what you told me not to do.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:47 PM
No. I think you are. I think you're special because you have digressed with me into a happy journey of non-constructive criticism of each other. This is a poetry forum isn't it? After all, you told me not to,
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:44 PM
As a boy I *whimper* was vey loved. *sniff* W-wh-wha- *more sniffs*-what d-d-dyou mean b-b-*More and louder sniffs*-by that? Ha. Ha. No. I just don't happen to conform to the monolingual ignorance and idiocy of most Americans.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:32 PM
How touching. Perhaps you are not a teenager. You certainly sound like one much of the time
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:09 PM
She's since taken the link to her website from her user profile- probably because I made use of it. I'll respect her privacy and not give it out
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:01 PM
Yes, I will when you do. Maybe I'm not getting something here or maybe I've been suddenly snatched up by a group of Crack Gangsters and am now living a narcotic fantasy, but I can't seem to find a way to lable use of the word "bow'ls" as the only word in a comment as any sort of constructive criticism. Now THAT's immature. Speaking of maturity kid, in response to my two posts about why YOU were the one with the bow'ls obsession, all you could say was the very word "bow'ls." Seriously, go do some homework or something.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/12:56 PM
The obsession with "bow'ls" is yours not mine. You're the friggin' one who introduced the word to the site! You're the one who used it (now) a total of 30 times! Speaking of maturity kid, in response to my two posts about why YOU were the one with the bow'ls obsession, all you could say was the word "bow'ls." Seriously, go do some homework or something.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/12:56 PM
The obsession with "bow'ls" is yours not mine. You're the friggin' one who introduced the word to the site! You're the one who used it (now) a total of 30 times! Speaking of maturity kid, in response to my two posts about why YOU were the one with the bow'ls obsession, all you could say was the word "bow'ls." Seriously, go do some homework or something.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/12:51 PM
But ineloquently worded passion is little better
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/12:44 PM
In either sense, this poem fails to evoke any emotion from me at all. While it may have been written during an emotional momen, and while the author may have tried to make it contain emotions, I think that it doesn't. That's my honest opinion, sorry. And anyway, when did you get the moral weight to talk about what's immature? I would take a look at some of your own comments before telling other people about their maturity level.