Re: Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer	27-Aug-04/8:18 PM
A bit wordy for my taste, but still not too shabby.
Re: Hoodwinked by Dovina	2-Sep-04/4:55 PM
hogwash? really? For some reason, I tink that word takes away from it...but thats just me. The rest is good though.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-04/7:48 PM
You've always got a positive message. ;0)
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-04/7:50 PM
Sad when this sort of thing happens.
Re: How many? by rnsbreeze	2-Sep-04/7:58 PM
...roads must a man walk down, before you can call him a man? ...licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?
Re: happy birthday by rnsbreeze	2-Sep-04/7:59 PM
a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..
Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	2-Sep-04/8:02 PM
So true.
Re: Heart by Shardik	2-Sep-04/8:05 PM
very old-school.
Re: Edges by Blue Magpie	8-Sep-04/6:33 PM
Very pretty. Grows a bit stale in a couple of spots and there are some forced rhymes, but overall I like it. Been a while since I've seen you on here. Welcome back.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Sep-04/6:34 PM
Wonder why she doesn't like blind dates...
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	8-Sep-04/6:49 PM
The bottom line is that smoking is cool and you know it. If you damn nonsmokers would take the time to learn how to smoke, you'd realize how good it really is. In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-04/7:23 PM
This reminds me of Fight Club. Not bad. I think some of the lines could be cut out to make a tighter package and I'm not sure about the word smelt but overall, not bad.
Re: Solitude by Dovina	13-Sep-04/7:24 PM
A spiral in phi? I like the sentiment behind it, but I'm just not feelin' this one D.
Re: Grandpa's boat by Caducus	13-Sep-04/7:28 PM
I like it.
Re: Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali	13-Sep-04/7:32 PM
Naughty, which is kind of nice. I think though, that this kind of thing is better said with a less graphic tone. Not that I'm trying to say that i'm offended or anything. I just think it would be a better poem for it.
Re: A Choice by Dovina	13-Sep-04/7:41 PM
I rather like "They make me glad". Pure simplicity. Thats the way I like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-04/7:43 PM
The good thing about trees is that you can grow more. What'll they think of next?
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Sep-04/7:35 PM
I keep thinking of Peter Gabriel with this one. Maybe a different title and lessening the repetition of "in your eyes" would help.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Sep-04/7:37 PM
I like it but I d actually like to see a little more.
Re: Many Thanks by Dovina	29-Sep-04/7:45 PM
I was wondering where you've been.