Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	23-Aug-02/8:55 PM
Wow, in the name if Frass I want to be constructive to this, but it is tough. There is not a lot to work with. It sounds like a rap, which is, well, maybe, could be, some form of poetry, right? But the real problem with the poem is that is is way, way to didactic. And that is not good preacher man.
Re: Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8	23-Aug-02/3:28 PM
And here I thought this was a huge uni-tit woman decapitated by the alien controlled errant lawnmower blade, with an anorexic waste from eating the grass while the mower was in the shop and a skirt the would make Freud proud. I guess I was wrong.
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/3:25 PM
Shit as a metaphor, not a poem type. Sorry to mislead. the poem or not a poeme but story in this case is quite the amusing ditty.
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/3:10 PM
I think they are all over reacting. Because although you are the Joyce Carol Oates of fragmented poetic parody and this is the foundation of all your criticism (i.e. I am the verbal watchdog and I will cast you down with any debate and you cannot even say my poetry is shit because I write it to be shit therefore all of you arguments will send you spinning in a circular catch-22), it is not the fucking the "greatest story ever told" as your minions seem to think. It is a ditty and continues your legacy of shit. Better?
Re: Dignity by kthulah	23-Aug-02/10:23 AM
Jesus, I fell like I am reading an interview with fucking Hester. Go change your clothes!
Re: Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8	22-Aug-02/7:00 PM
Fuck, do you like burn calories when you write this stuff. It makes me sweat just reading it!
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	22-Aug-02/4:07 PM
Perhaps, DA, perhaps.
Re: Rainbow Tears by talking_goldfish	22-Aug-02/3:33 PM
Don't let anyone tell you this is a good poem. It is not a good poem. It is a bad, bad poem.
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	22-Aug-02/3:32 PM
Okay I get it. Sorry Dark Fuck, I do not have your superior skills of interpretation of allusions to the asshole. You must bend over and stare at that thing a lot considering a good deal of your thoughts, comments, and poems involve shit and its synonyms.
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	22-Aug-02/3:06 PM
huh. This is an odd little ditty indeed. The last line confuses me. Tell me what you are saying because the haiku does not.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/3:10 PM
And I am saying fucking welcome!!
Re: Sexxodus by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/2:32 PM
Welcome, Gloria. Considering we have a wealth of nationalism, sexism, racism and numerous other isms all over this site, feminism will fit right in. Welcome.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/2:28 PM
Hmmm. Wouldn't be a bad way to die?
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	21-Aug-02/1:51 PM
And considering I have know idea who you are you can be assured that I am not putting you down, but only your crappy poetry. I am sorry you feel that way about my poems, because actually, they are quite good and you should take after them. You might learn something.
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	21-Aug-02/1:48 PM
Like I know who the fuck every shit ass poet that comes through the random file is. I am sorry I did not remember whom the fuck you were so I could understand your clever ditty. If I said your poem was not so cool or sucked, it most likely did. And what I have to say is easy compared to what you might as well get used to on this site. The first rule to improving at writing poetry in your case is to get thicker skin.
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	21-Aug-02/12:23 AM
I wish I could say somewhere other than Misery, but KC (born and raised til 17) is it. I have lived a ton of places, (Montreal being the favorite), but I am back here for the time being. At least I travel a good deal. You? Deal! Ah!! I am off to get my fax. Until tomorrow.
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	21-Aug-02/12:07 AM
Last Friday I was in Colorado for Romer's 50th wedding anniversary. I was there to interview family and a few supporters from his home state of CO. So I went with my friend Babbit (I'll keep the name anonymous) and we tied one on. Listening to my questions the other day, I sound like an idiot. Oh well, it is almost over. Two years worth of work on one story coming to an end. Then it is on to finish others. That is all I have. When the article comes out, I will drop a line. You can trash it!!!!
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:55 PM
Roy Romer's progress as the superintendent for the LA school district. Seen from the level of politicians, teachers, kids, janitors, you name it.
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:47 PM
She is keeping my fingers to the keys and I need that. I have a fucking deadline to meet and I am stuck at the moment waiting for a fact checker to verify something. Journalism, you know, where did I go wrong.
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:45 PM
I think I will pass on the teenybopper bible. I have had quite enough thank you. I am going to go sing god bless America, wake up my dear daughter and head to the hood and show her how to hold a crack pipe. So continue to write your shit and amuse us will your lovely use of the English language. You should be in school. You obviously have learned very little in you early high school years. Maybe you should leave you mom and find more suitable parenting. But on this last note, because I tire of you and need to get back to my work, enjoy a line on me and make sure to floss when you brush.