Re: Your judge is you by dilips_10	6-Sep-02/10:41 AM
This poem really says nothing. If there are any specifics, they are lost in the style. Why not "you may" all the way. I was sad to see it stop.
Re: Until Then by Katie	6-Sep-02/10:39 AM
Another Lite Brite poem from the youngster class. Everything about this poem is boring, but considering the age of the Arteest, I suppose I should find it shear genius. But trite is trite. Sorry.
Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	6-Sep-02/8:41 AM
The two computer thing, sure that was a joke, although I never know, especially if you are on of those tech sorts. But as far as you and the beaker being the same, well, no joke there.
Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	5-Sep-02/10:41 PM
Yeah, DA. Two computers.
Re: Celebration by unknown	5-Sep-02/10:39 PM
Who knows? And why is it that all erotica uses the word petal describe skin, and of course, there are the heaving breasts. I see Fabio, do you? This is terrible GW. You have been single too long.
Re: *I am me* by savannah	5-Sep-02/6:33 PM
How can you be all these things? What is it to be stardust and dreams? What is it to be hugs and kisses? This makes no sense. And why does the title have ** around it? To the trashcan with this.
Re: Grief by ifni	5-Sep-02/6:31 PM
The redundancy sure does not sneak up on you. I am sure there are much better ways to approach such a broad subject as grief.
Re: Angel by pnaipoet	5-Sep-02/6:28 PM
such a sweet angel. They do that sorta thin? Watchin' o'r ya. Cute rhyme scheme. The Beaker will love this one. But me, i prefer a differn sorta poetry.
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/2:22 PM
Either I hang out in the wrong pubs, or quit going to clubs long ago but I guess I don't see all that many goth folks so I am not sure what sort of definition they would have today. When I was a wee lad, they listened to the cure, wore eyeliner, spiky hair (you know, hey my adolescence was in the 80s) and bemoaned the world against them. Still hold true in 2002?
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/12:03 PM
Wow, where did this come from? I though this discussion was over. We now know the Bacchus scandal. And we know god,alex/ben are one, but you are a mystery. I though beakism was you. He/she logged in last night. And what about the other -=l33k=- character with the same wings, who was that. I cannot keep up with this soap opera.
Re: The Tide by RWAndersen	3-Sep-02/7:37 PM
Like the first line, but then it runs into cliche and falls apart. wow, I have gone all day at random w/o hunt and peck. thanks for the fix.
Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil	3-Sep-02/7:32 PM
Good poem. Shades of Bukowski "I am the only poet in this town tonight" I see. But only shades and that is good.
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/10:53 AM
Therefore, you do not buy my "I'm a six year old theory?" Shall I change the about me? I am an ugly man, educated in the east, living in Misery, who is a hater of the ugly people. My dear, I am a strongly committed ugly man. What shall my other think if I am scurrying off?
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/10:29 AM
Because it is cute and endearing and in a public place and I am ugly and a hater of the ugly children.
Re: A hungry wife by ben	3-Sep-02/10:17 AM
I am not afraid of letting it all hang out under one sign. Keep it simple. Plus, all my work is genius (i.e. poetandknowit), so no reason to hide crap someplace else. There is none. I don't see how you multifaceted folks keep it all together. Too many user manes, to many passwords.
Re: Basic comedy by Garrett S Sexton	3-Sep-02/10:12 AM
hahahaha. funny for a sec. and then, stupid.
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/10:11 AM
I was commenting on the poem. And giving Christof, the highest of praise. Many of his other poems wandered a bit trying to be too heady. Simple subjects deserve heady treatment, but make sure all the cogs are there. I am not simply going to mush, mush, kiss, kiss, over poetry that looks good on paper, but upon a closer look, needs a bit of tuning.
Re: A hungry wife by ben	3-Sep-02/10:05 AM
"Neon light in betrayal." Missed it with that one and makes the poem...well...rubbish. and why not put this under god or alex? Or is ben your outlet for crap?
Re: The Final Hour by Modulo	3-Sep-02/10:03 AM
Has poetry really been reduced to using emos? This sucks!
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/9:59 AM
And not to be picky, but I do not like the sound of the contraction at the end. they'll. I read it with "they will" and liked the sound and flow better, but hey that is me...off to the shower with this ringing in my head.