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A hungry wife (Free verse) by ben I have a hungry wife
in the mountains she sleeps
She sheds her neon light in betrayal
And when the sun sets makes promises
she can not keep.
Live on,endure, I try.
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Posted: September 3, 2002 9:59 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2002 9:59 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7317934 Overall Rank: 11747 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.210.123
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3-Sep-02/10:05 AM
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"Neon light in betrayal." Missed it with that one and makes the poem...well...rubbish. and why not put this under god or alex? Or is ben your outlet for crap?
I am not afraid of letting it all hang out under one sign. Keep it simple. Plus, all my work is genius (i.e. poetandknowit), so no reason to hide crap someplace else. There is none. I don't see how you multifaceted folks keep it all together. Too many user manes, to many passwords.
This is a load of crap-1/10
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