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A hungry wife (Free verse) by ben

I have a hungry wife in the mountains she sleeps She sheds her neon light in betrayal And when the sun sets makes promises she can not keep. Live on,endure, I try.

poetandknowit 3-Sep-02/10:05 AM
"Neon light in betrayal." Missed it with that one and makes the poem...well...rubbish. and why not put this under god or alex? Or is ben your outlet for crap?




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