| Re: a comment on The Thought Of It by Christof |
20-Nov-02/10:06 AM |
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Seriously. This blew me away. Send it out.
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| Re: a comment on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Nov-02/10:01 AM |
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Oh yes, another in the long line of the creative adjectives strewn at my work, accept this case in the verb form. Let me feel you tits, and I too, will give you 10s.
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| Re: a comment on Kindling by <~> |
20-Nov-02/9:57 AM |
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If is meant to be convoluted that is how I took it, so in that case it functions. It is a wood burning stove then, not a fireplace that the wood is going into?
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| Re: a comment on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Nov-02/9:49 AM |
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But in this "artificial environment" you do give him all 10s. That was were the comment came from. It was meant to be funny as you are the butt of many of my jokes, which you should preceive as an honor. Where is Limonade? I miss her. Call her and tell her P&K misses her!
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| Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
19-Nov-02/11:29 PM |
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Why do you feel sorry for her? And no, you should not have brought your prof into this. Just because some published academic goof who teaches of all things a "creative writing class", which is in essence group therapy, says you poetry is good does not mean the general public will accept it. That is life. Most people read John Grisham, not Paul Auster. I am glad your prof deems you to have potential. It is a good feeling and maybe you are deserving, but frankly you have a long way to go. The slams you receive are simply responses to your, well, slams.
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| Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
19-Nov-02/11:21 PM |
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Yes, but you also denied one of those aspects as being a valid subject for poetry. Did you prof tell you that?
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| Re: a comment on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness |
19-Nov-02/10:54 PM |
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comment deleter (new word).
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| Re: a comment on I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon |
19-Nov-02/10:50 PM |
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I still don't get it. Are you the other person? Is it your pie? Should we change the word pie to turd? How many kids? three? Day job? Still have sex?
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| Re: a comment on I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon |
19-Nov-02/10:43 PM |
1. my city established 1876. Centennial State. Columbine, flower (and historic shooting event that inspired a 5K and a new license plate). Bird, Chrsitof. I live in the heart of it. I am less than 1 mile from a store that sells at least 15 brands of condoms.
2. Which pic. Major windburn in the bike race. Did I mention how much pain I was in. You would not believe.
(It is not last call or anywhere near it here).
3. i don't understand.
4. I hate everyone here, except you, of course
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| Re: a comment on Absence by newdawnfades |
19-Nov-02/10:36 PM |
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Have you had a sudden musical epiphany?
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| Re: a comment on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
19-Nov-02/10:32 PM |
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Hell no. It feels to fucking good!
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| Re: a comment on I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon |
19-Nov-02/10:30 PM |
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First off, you live in the country or small town America. Of course, CT is a suburb of NYC. But who are we kidding, you sleep at a farm and chew hay at work. Second: I use sunscreen to avoid any unnecessary redness. Third: Well it was about the pie thing, but I won't go there. Minors are on the site. Fourth: We should all be one loving group. Hugs and kisses from the soul. Poet's call to arms. Keep on writing, on.
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| Re: a comment on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness |
19-Nov-02/10:20 PM |
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Are you drunk and at the barn?
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| Re: missing you by Goose |
19-Nov-02/10:14 PM |
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I agree with Christof Cad and goose.
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| Re: a comment on I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon |
19-Nov-02/10:12 PM |
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Silly rabbit. Poetry is not to be judged as one person being better than another. It is from the soul, the deepest form of expression. We are all one poet, one word. We are all in the same boat cast at sea, lost, waiting for a downed tanker to break. Now, you two take hands. Kiss and make up. Send me the picture for a good bathroom tug. And I do not know what I am talking about becasue I have no pictures but the one's I create in my head. Do you not live in the suburbs?
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| Re: a comment on I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon |
19-Nov-02/9:57 PM |
You're too funny. I was simply trying to lighten things up as you and abbas traded barbs on who was the better writer. Did you drink your vitamin C today? The fruit question was a defense. She threw that out and I thought it was a funny thing to throw in an argument. You are the one making the derogatory isms about Hispanics and their role as house cleaners and turndown specialists. You forgot to mention nannies. Where that came from, I have no idea. You are hypersensitive. I made no reference to you growing up, I was simply relaying the fact that you, now, as a big girl, live in the suburbs. That would make you a suburbanite. Peasants in this day and age would most likely live in rural poverty or inner city poverty. That would not be you, becasue you live in suburban LA. Correct? Thanks for the comparison to Eddy, but, frankly, I do not think One Country is equal to throwing sand in your face.
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| Re: Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl |
19-Nov-02/7:35 PM |
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Now, I am really not sure that I know how to read poetry, especially poetry that is this bad, but I don't think you really understand friendship. I think you need to experience things before you actually write about them.
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| Re: When It's All Over by BUFFY0BSESSED |
19-Nov-02/7:29 PM |
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Seriously now. This site is for real poems.
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| Re: Kindling by <~> |
19-Nov-02/7:28 PM |
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I would remove "spent"? I think the word "scraps" is a bit misleading, especially when implied with stove. The last stanza is excellent.
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| Re: The Thought Of It by Christof |
19-Nov-02/7:24 PM |
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