Re: The Thought Of It by Christof	19-Nov-02/7:23 PM
Although this poem has a lost sense of place, it more than makes up for it in depth. Best poem on the site. Hands down.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	19-Nov-02/7:21 PM
Have you no honor man; letting Settle anonymously rank your work so you can have the best and the worst. You should remove these at once or run and hide in shame. He has already stated his intentions and is going crazy with the blue line. A respectable man would do something about it.
Re: Down Again by Birdman42s	19-Nov-02/7:18 PM
I. I. I. Me. Me. Me. Really this is nothing more than a statement without any images. One screwed up sentence of "Oh Woe, Woe is Me." Not a poem worth anything.
Re: "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	19-Nov-02/6:54 PM
Why do you have the //// in there? Why not. >>>> or <<<< or ^^^^^ or }}}} or [[[[ or |||||||? What to they add to this here poem? And when are you going to write another triangle? Should I post the response you should have said to him as a poem. Maybe titled: If Z was in here right mind this is what she should have said to the furnace fixer?
Re: a comment on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	19-Nov-02/6:51 PM
Please do not flatter yourself.
Re: a comment on Absence by newdawnfades	19-Nov-02/4:39 PM
I am a firm beliver in simplified language to get the point across, but at time I think the language her is too simplified: "tall tree" (wouldn't we somewhat assume the tree is tall?). "rocky ridge on a bright clear day" - not only is this passage a bit over simplified but it is vague. And then you give absence a gender. What are your referring to? god? Did the narrator fall and get knocked out? It is just confusing, And the beginning images do not seem to connect with the meeting of. Make sense? I am more interested to know what happened on the rocky ridge, in concise images that brought you to the realizations you are making in the front of the poem.
Re: St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>	19-Nov-02/4:19 PM
GW is suffering from the Razorgrin to Shin complex and will give anything you write a ten. And while this is an interesting piece and quite funny at times, it is just that: at times.
Re: In the heart there is freedom by mozac	19-Nov-02/4:15 PM
Jesus, what is it with you people and birds? Have you been hanging out with the guy that writes ... poems? This sounds like a weak attempt at a corny motivational speech. And now for your entertainment pleasure we present: "Church sermons gone Bad."
Re: Absence by newdawnfades	19-Nov-02/4:11 PM
Well, I suppose it is better than writing to feel dead. At least if you did that, this would be a better attempt. You know, Christof has a ton of poems about birds. Look him up. Plus, he has never had a mullet.
Re: I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon	19-Nov-02/4:07 PM
And Abba, what does L-G-O mean?
Re: I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon	19-Nov-02/4:06 PM
And Abba, coould you do something with the form of this poem, like break it up some, so it doesn't drag for a mile accross my screen.
Re: a comment on I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon	19-Nov-02/4:05 PM
You are a fan of Rod the poet!! GW I never knew. And abbas do you really have five kids? That is a ton. That is like the ratio in India. Do you live on a farm and put them to work? And GW, you are not a peasant; you are a suburbanite. Did you ever pick fruit? I think she's got you on that one.
Re: a comment on Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles	19-Nov-02/8:14 AM
Do you have a mullet? Z mentioned to me you and the wife were headed to New Z. Have fun. I am off there in a couple of months. Are you driving both islands or sticking to a few places?
Re: a comment on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit	19-Nov-02/8:04 AM
You can be my bodyguard. I love picnics. What will you bring?
Re: a comment on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit	19-Nov-02/8:03 AM
Now, wouldn't you meeting me in Mexico constitute as betrayal on both parts? How would we write that one off? Oh, yes, you could be my translator!! I use them all the time--no one would ever suspect. Did you see how politicians handle things in your country?
Re: Mistakes by wickedemon4	19-Nov-02/7:49 AM
Did you conjure this while skateboarding?
Re: Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles	19-Nov-02/7:46 AM
If you're going to flood the site with this crap, then please do not call it haiku. Maybe free verse, or how about "a random thought I woke up with this morning." Nentman, add that one to the list.
Re: a comment on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit	15-Nov-02/8:25 PM
Nothing frightens me except timing myself writing poetry. Seems like an undergrad (sorry guys) thing to do. Shall I take you riding one day. Or better yet, to the places I wander below this land. pfft.
Re: a comment on Dynamic Duo by INTRANSIT	15-Nov-02/4:44 PM
Horus8, brig or no brig, you are just to damn pretty to have anyone's back. I mean that with the best intentions. Of course the tatoo is scary.
Re: a comment on Dynamic Duo by INTRANSIT	15-Nov-02/4:42 PM
I do not envy his liberties, where did that one come from. And I am not having problems with my wife other than those I create in my head. And I am fair game. If I inspire you to write such trash, then so be it. And you use trucker talk all of the time. I like it, so I use it back. Your own paranoia makes you think it is patronizing. I have nothing to patronize you on. I quite frankly like the ice cream served at truck stops. I believe it is a variation of ice milk. I have also been known to dabble in the porn booths they offer out west. It gets lonely on the road. And it is much easy to tug away in a stationary position rather than in motion. Besides, how would you explain that one to a police officer? Unless, of course, it was a policewoman. Then she would understand. And maybe even join in for a second round. I was asking you the same. I know nothing else about you other than you drive a truck full of cars. I hate cars, especially the ones you have mentioned driving from point to point. If I were you, I would just let the trailer go when you are parked on a hill somewhere in Indiana. Quit eating so many donuts while you drive. The sugar is jacking with your head. So put down all of you imaginary weapons and go run to your wife and tell her poetandknowit was mean to you again. Although I wasn't. 10-4. Good buddy. Oh, by the way, considering you would give a pile of shit a 10 I find it rather funny that in your poem you attempt to jab at work of such fine quality. Over and out. Roger Wilco. Yankee Hotel Foxtrot. And while I am at it, Gods Wife is not "there" for me. I have never met her and she barely answers my e-mails. So stop imagining things.