regarding some deleted poem...	25-Aug-02/10:16 PM
And if you want to see a knife to the throat go look at Ms Friedan's comments from the past week. some lovely jousts. She has softened over the week. But watch out.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Aug-02/10:22 PM
Holy shit where are you coming from? Just a few days ago you came on all high and mighty with your poetic airs, slamming this and slamming that and now you get all sweet, cuddly and innocent over something that is actually not good, and a personality that is borderline volatile. Have you had a heart transplant? And, I am not trying to sound clever. I am trying to defend the English language from adolescent raping. Some things are better said in a journal.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Aug-02/10:28 PM
Well Z probably put it in more sincere form than I could, but the point is the same. This is the perfect site for this to come up. And frankly I don't want to be apart of something like it. Poetry is poetry. This is something else. And, you Ms Gloria, great defender of the female gender, should be concerned. I mean you are a parent, I'm a parent. Get it. Sorry, Annie for sounding so harsh, but seriously, how are you doing?
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Aug-02/10:30 PM
Ha! Annie, I made the same mistake as you - a part not Apart. I think we just type to fast.
Re: Oh mother, thou art stoned! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Aug-02/10:34 PM
Keeping with current events I see. But I like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Aug-02/9:32 AM
Okay, off the site you fucking plagiarist hack.
Re: A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin	26-Aug-02/10:12 AM
And then take off those shoes and get in that kitchen and make me some supper!! Although the sentiment may be sincere, the poem is filled with over the top mush.
Re: Call Me Lional by LobotomyNeedle	26-Aug-02/10:17 AM
Consider you were trying for the joke element you deserve no praise.
Re: Daisies by LobotomyNeedle	26-Aug-02/10:18 AM
What's the point? Pure stupidity.
Re: A Boy Named Todd by LobotomyNeedle	26-Aug-02/10:19 AM
This is the best of the three. Kipling would be proud.
Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit	26-Aug-02/3:23 PM
D.A. now come on, you are satirizing your own satire; using cruelty as another expression of cruelty. Just be mean. Screw the little tots and their love poems. But you may be on to something in this poem, but let???s see how it turns out.
Re: One wish by mishy_lee	26-Aug-02/3:57 PM
Mishy this is just way too mushy.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Aug-02/4:04 PM
This is truly a grim image. I am sorry for your loss da.
Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit	26-Aug-02/5:27 PM
I have not been paying any attention to god's wife (aka Ms Gloria, although I cannot call her that anymore). My point is if you change the scope of your critique so you give the illusion of being kind and cuddly to poems (and I guarantee you there are some who will take it that way) and revert into pure satire we are, in a sense, losing an element that makes this site tick. As far as this poem goes, I kept the articles in the poem and chose "cat" for a specific reason and I think you are picking up on it.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Aug-02/5:35 PM
That is fucking hilarious. Talk about pin the tale on the donkey. Horus8 nails it you monotonous fuck. Having been blessed at hearing him read on numerous occasions, I can honestly say he has perfected the art of "desperation monotone" and the colored girls go "do do do" and want to take the sweet drunk of a poet home and save him from his own pathetic self. It is a tactic specifically designed to pick up women. Babbit and I would drink in a bar and he would be lost in thought and I would say to the ladies, oh and this is my friend, he is a poet and they would ohh and ahh at his aloofness. The tortured soul and kindred spirit and they were hooked. And Ben, if pretentious means way over you head, then this is definitely that type of shitty poem.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	26-Aug-02/11:40 PM
Excuse me for intervening in here, but shut the fuck up, you driveling idiot and get off the sexually repressed soapbox. Bitch and moan all you want about Shin and razors utterly exposed sex life if you post something you fuck. If not, shut the hell up, because frankly you sound like some type of fool that has issues with your sexuality. Thus, you decided to come on this site with your once were warrior's hogwash and berate people who are actually trying to better themselves as poets. Granted there is a good deal of amateurish writing on this site, but there are also quite a few poets here with a good deal of talent. And you are obviously too narrow minded to see that. And for you to continue with this nonsensical drool regarding two people obviously fond of each with such vile and crude statements just leave. Because we have enough little dicked wonders (sorry Gods wife) on this site as it is. But at least they post and take the heat. You my friend simply hide behind your high school mannerisms without proving yourself. You weak-minded waste. So do not go fuck the world, just go fuck yourself.
Re: UNTITLED by New Life Drug	27-Aug-02/12:14 AM
This sounds angry and that is the only thing I like. But it is without merit.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-02/7:14 PM
Why is it that every night we get more examples of writing straight out of a teenager's sad life diary? And why is it that every life lead by a teenager on this site, regardless of age, sounds exactly the same? If you rearranged this thing and changed all the words but kept the rhythm, you might have a nice children's rhyme.
Re: Suicide III by disturbedone182	27-Aug-02/7:18 PM
Of good god, see all the other adolescent angsters on this site and do a group hug. All your stuff is so over-the-top melodramatic, filled with such serious problems as pimples and being grounded on Friday night so you cannot go to the mall. Just wait, it gets worse. But seriously, contact all the teeny bops on the site and give a big hug to cure your sad miserable writing.
Re: Suicide I by disturbedone182	27-Aug-02/7:21 PM
Didn't I just read this? Why did you just make it one poem? It is the same. Both are so filled with redundancies that you could cut down both into one haiku. The random file is throwing some real crap out tonight.