regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-02/10:22 PM
Okay, I see we have a problem here and being the nice person I am, I want to resolve it with my two pennies. Okay, God's Wife is not saying the poem sucks, but I will be more than happy to say it sucks, because, well, it does. It is tied down with over bearing triteness thats sound like it is coming from someone who had his heart broken and the started reading David Eddings. I mean come on: there is Darkness Visible and there is Darkness Just Plain Goofy. And unlike Dark Angel, I am not being ironic. But you do have the following of a 14 year old blonde girl and royalflesh, who we thought was horus8 but no way in any character could he give this an 8, so that settles that. so that should get the muse working. Sadness or depression can be dealt with in so many wonderful ways, unfortunately, you have taken the route of every other teenager (I know you are not one, but you sound like one) and therefore are deserving of the harsh criticism. That is just the nature of the beast. that 0 there, well, it is mine. And that is my piece.
Re: Why... by livingcanvas	18-Sep-02/10:39 PM
This has to be the dumbest poem ever written or even thought of in the history of bad poem writing. This is ten times worse than a flaming pustule of a pimple poem. This is 10 times as bad as anything I have ever read in my thirty three paltry years. The horror of having to read something so unworthy has made me... ... ... run to the restroom ... ... ... why ... ... why ... ... why ... ... Did yu show this to your mother, teacher, puppy. did you get a gold star? Yes, delete, delete, del....
Re: Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87	18-Sep-02/10:50 PM
Please stop writing. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with sugar on top. Is anyone here a HS creative writing teacher? Please, if so, tell me how do you stand going to your job every day?
Re: Circle by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:41 AM
Ah yes, the Times, coffee, a tug and poo and a poem from Chistof to start my day. The circle motif is a bit overused, but always sweet when chaps don't throw the cynicism behind it. I would do that, but you my friend, are to damn sweet.
Re: In the Light by nocturnalism	19-Sep-02/8:55 AM
Besides being awful, I think you have a terrible misunderstanding of neurosis and that adds to the banality twofold.
Re: Winter by morffrom	19-Sep-02/8:59 AM
Why heaven? That kind of blows the image for me of an otherwise welcome attempt at haiku.
Re: Fleas by bigbigdog	19-Sep-02/10:56 AM
Okay, fuck face it is one thing to be an idiot and have no one know you are, but when you display what a fuck you are to the world, well that is another story. You hack, you fucking rip off aritist, you fucking thief, you fucking plagiarist. DO NOT STEAL WORK FROM POETS, especially OGDEN NASH and claim it as your own. This is RUDE and FUCKING WRONG. This poem, one of the shortest ever written, has more profundities in it than you could ever think up in a lifetime. You are an insult, a worthless fucking trite of a human being. And if you do not die soon for this action, I hope your life is miserable just the same. Nentwind, we have to get control of this shit. Delete this poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Sep-02/11:34 AM
Have you seen a horse! That is big. Super big. I'm not sure any man can live up to that comparison or would want to. A four tug poem!
Re: Fleas by bigbigdog	19-Sep-02/12:29 PM
Okay, fuck face it is one thing to be an idiot and have no one know you are, but when you display what a fuck you are to the world, well that is another story. You hack, you fucking rip off aritist, you fucking thief, you fucking plagiarist. DO NOT STEAL WORK FROM POETS, especially OGDEN NASH and claim it as your own. This is RUDE and FUCKING WRONG. This poem, one of the shortest ever written, has more profundities in it than you could ever think up in a lifetime. You are an insult, a worthless fucking trite of a human being. And if you do not die soon for this action, I hope your life is miserable just the same. Nentwind, we have to get control of this shit. Delete this poem.
Re: Torn... by loneshadow29	19-Sep-02/1:27 PM
:o(
Re: Glassblowers by Christof	20-Sep-02/8:48 AM
My morning Christof and one of my favorites!! Were you in Branson, Missouri. Glassblowers everywhere. Damn, you even have birds in glass, impressive. The last stanza is one of the best I have seen on the site! Excellent stuff! Now to the poo...
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-02/9:21 AM
I see you vote on your own poems. How cute!
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-02/9:42 AM
Anybody that would give this poem a 10 has obviously never read anything above the 5th grade. So I am assume it is self-induced with one from the peep bigdog. It was done at recess when the teacher was not looking.
Re: Father worked Nights, Thats why I am fucked up by bigbigdog	20-Sep-02/10:41 AM
Have I hurt your feelings so bad that you attempt to make even a bigger fool out of yourself than you already have? Because you are a plagiarist, most people will not see these poems, but I will direct everybody to bigdog's revenge against Poetandknowit. Everyone, come hither and see the bigdog disgrace himself further. It is like self-flogging, self-humiliation. I do not need to do it, because he is doing a fine job on his own. It is lethal and yes, most of it is stolen. Now that I have your computer number I will be more than happy to have my lawyers call yours. Shall you just give me their phone number?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/4:04 PM
So what band did you steal these lyrics from? Sounds like a mix of Heart and Foreigner, but you are probably to young to remember that crab. So how about Korn or the Backstreet Boys. Regardless, it is another meager attempt.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/4:08 PM
Do you bother proofreading these before you submit them. Is it "warm"? "Wrapped up"? Snuggling is oh so un poetic. Is it fall or winter? The context is off. I believe you could just uses "open". Plain not plan. Bandit not bandet. Okay, this is just goofy!
Re: Taffy by knickytoy	24-Sep-02/4:30 PM
Pretty good stuff. Are you really z's friend or are you z. Do you garden at night? Are you prettier than she? I need to know these things before we go on. Anyway, minus the fact I tripped up over the caps on each line except for beautiful, which I thought was unnecessarily blatant, this is a fine piece.
Re: Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer	24-Sep-02/6:15 PM
I suggest a threesome. Problem solved. No more curses. But the poem, oh yes, the poem. You manage to keep the whole he she, we, see, me, I bit intact and relatively clear, but I just do not feel the desire for the boy across the way or the remorse for the girl. This makes me think you really do not care and that transcends on the reader. Reply X
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/6:17 PM
There are so many semicolons in this poem (and many, if not all, used incorrectly and unnecessarily) that it kills the flow from the outset and ultimately the poem. But maybe that is the secret special point of the title.
Re: Oh Well III by RWAndersen	24-Sep-02/6:18 PM
Oh well is right!