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20 most recent comments by Shin-Bojangles (61-80)

Re: A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z 11-Aug-02/1:30 AM
Hannibal is just as crazy.

Sometimes.
Re: A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z 11-Aug-02/1:30 AM
Hannibal is just as crazy.

Sometimes.
Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin 11-Aug-02/2:20 AM
Just a couple of little things.
Firstly, unless it's some sorta wacky unique thing, it should be "drunk bane" not smiting. Also, Spell Resistance isn't measureed in bonuses, so just 20 would be fine. Finally, though it is an acceptable synonym, with your use of out-of-game terms in the sentence, it might be more prudent to say "high-level wizardess (or sorcereress)" instead of mage, since the mage classification dosn't really exist tangibly in 3rd Edition.
Sorry! :)
Re: wizard master by beakism 11-Aug-02/2:30 AM
Heh.
I like "cheekism" best.
I'll build a bunch of Cheekaurans and Cheekasaurases and they'll totally go to town on all these tiny people.

Awesome
Re: Flight of the Samurai by Shin-Bojangles 11-Aug-02/2:43 AM
To find the answer to that, you'll have to read my much awaited sequel. :D

P.S.- I should have mentioned, while reading this piece and any of its sequels, you should be listening to either the theme from "Soul Blade", the theme from "Evangelion" or "Thunderstruck". Thanks!
Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z 11-Aug-02/2:48 AM
Damn, your wang is dusty? This really IS serious. :S Well, take heart... at least you can tell her to scrub some stubborn floor-stain and jerk while she bends over.

Yahoo!
Re: A-Team #2 by Shin-Bojangles 11-Aug-02/2:50 AM
I'm not sure. I'll have to watch more TNN.

By the way, 'tang is supposed to be short for 'Poontang' (provided that word has no other connotation than 'booty'... I don't really know), not a reference to your beloved childhood orange drink. Though he probably craves tang too.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Aug-02/2:53 AM
They're not 'Roids, dude.
I think I got them falling nakedly out of bed upside down and backwards.
Owch!

I THINK.
Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin 13-Aug-02/12:23 AM
An unholy bargain to forge the Nametag of Invisibility? Seems like it could be usefull.
Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin 13-Aug-02/12:25 AM
At least we're in our element!

=b
Re: R'lyeh by razorgrin 13-Aug-02/12:32 AM
There's a certain point where comments stop being about the poetry, or even any discussion at hand, and start being immature cries for attention.

Some of us skip that crap and just write poems that are immature cries for attention.

P.S.- I missed the word "align" in this piece. It's a sweet word that dosn't get nearly enough use.

P.P.S.- Names with apostrophes=totally awesome
Re: Flight of the Samurai (Act II) by Shin-Bojangles 13-Aug-02/12:34 AM
Ok.
But any further questions about samurai will have to wait, thanks to that dern 4 poem posting limit.
Re: Walls by razorgrin 13-Aug-02/12:40 AM
Replace the word "Wolves" with the word "Drunks" and it becomes both 'deep' and 'true'.

'Lessun' you were being all metaphorical and such...


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