Re: a comment on Three In a Room by Sam	22-Jan-05/7:21 PM
LOL! The poem as far as I am comcerned isn't all about it.
Re: Swiftly by darkshark	6-Feb-04/6:53 PM
Nicely done!
Re: a comment on To A Streetchild by Sam	5-Feb-04/4:33 PM
and you're sweet, you guys inspire me even more. glad to be sorrounded by great poets...cheers to poetry...i still beleive in its power to charge the world...the way the ancient ones did before!
Re: a comment on To A Streetchild by Sam	5-Feb-04/4:31 PM
hey andrew thank you very much...that was very objective i'll put that in consideration...you're great
Re: a comment on Drizzle by Sam	5-Feb-04/4:22 PM
wow!...thanks a lot. I feel totally inspired by you and all of the wonderful comments. All the while i thought i'd be a lonely frustrated poet all my life. And somehow all of you guys realy gave life to aspiring poets like me. I hope more and more people would embrace poetry and change the world with their works...the way the ancient poet did before. Have a great poetic life!
Re: a comment on To A Streetchild by Sam	5-Feb-04/12:10 AM
Thanks for the comment i'll take it for consideration and there's no offense taken. The poem actually is a sad one, pure emotions something where my brain does'nt count (LOL), reason why maybe it doesn't evolved much. I just scribbled it away, when i saw that poor child.
Re: mythical by SupremeDreamer	3-Feb-04/12:11 AM
Love it when somebody else like me tries to embrace the mysteries of being!
Re: a comment on Drizzle by Sam	1-Feb-04/3:54 PM
Hey thank you very much. Great review, i'll put that into consideration for my next pieces. Have a great poetic life!
Re: a comment on Drizzle by Sam	1-Feb-04/3:54 PM
Hey thank you very much. Great review, i'll put that into consideration for my next pieces. Have a great poetic life!
Re: a comment on Drizzle by Sam	1-Feb-04/3:52 PM
That was great...it would help a lot for the improvement of my craft. You're such a delight. Thanks
Re: Take Four by NanceXToo	30-Jan-04/6:05 PM
wow this is great...i could almost feel your poem breath into me...a new beginning with a vengeance or maybe a better self worth.
Re: a comment on Drizzle by Sam	30-Jan-04/4:01 PM
thank you very much for that wonderful review, if you don't mind, kindly explain a little further please.
Re: To Avalon by annabellee	29-Jan-04/6:07 PM
Great one here...reminds me of the struggle in the early days when women are trying to find their voices and be heard and be given the chance to depend not only themselve but the world as well.
Re: Tomorrow by sykes	29-Jan-04/1:27 AM
This is good one hell of a drama on a Christmas eve but nevertheless poignant.
Re: Transmissional Dance by Red Optimist	28-Jan-04/9:30 PM
The rhymes and the meters does'nt quite go smoothly.
Re: See the Sun Overhead and Believe by phbiscuit	28-Jan-04/9:26 PM
This is great, i can see the symbolism and the social relevance of the poem if we would dig deeper from it's content. It's true we're deaf, blind and dumb somehow living in this universe.