on some deleted poem
28 Jan 2004, 9:16 PM
Too short did't quite catch the drift.
on See the Sun Overhead and Believe by phbiscuit
28 Jan 2004, 9:26 PM
This is great, i can see the symbolism and the social relevance of the poem if we would dig deeper from it's content. It's true we're deaf, blind and dumb somehow living in this universe.
on Transmissional Dance by Red Optimist
28 Jan 2004, 9:30 PM
The rhymes and the meters does'nt quite go smoothly.
on some deleted poem
29 Jan 2004, 4:35 PM
Great one here, although i'm still trying to figure out what it means. I am having a good picture though.
on To Avalon by annabellee
29 Jan 2004, 6:07 PM
Great one here...reminds me of the struggle in the early days when women are trying to find their voices and be heard and be given the chance to depend not only themselve but the world as well.
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2004, 9:31 PM
hell with those zeroes...this is a great, right-at-your-face and honest piece of poetry. No need for fancy word!
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2004, 6:08 PM
you're great in haikus, your work really worth a contemplation. short but speaks a thousand meanings.
on mythical by SupremeDreamer
3 Feb 2004, 12:11 AM
Love it when somebody else like me tries to embrace the mysteries of being!
on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2004, 10:41 PM
and life goes on...with it's lessons we have to learn!
This must have been hard to write because maybe it speaks about your experiences(I really don't know) but in between the lines are lessons that youth must learn from...
Hey yougters out there, read this and learn.
You're great!...peace!
This must have been hard to write because maybe it speaks about your experiences(I really don't know) but in between the lines are lessons that youth must learn from...
Hey yougters out there, read this and learn.
You're great!...peace!
on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2004, 10:44 PM
Oh my God...can you read this to me in my bedtime...one of those poems that realy awaken the my innerchild. Love it
on some deleted poem
6 Feb 2004, 7:11 PM
very true...parents nowadays don't spend much time with their children so they acted like monkeys (LOL) and no pill can ever cure this other than the time a parent could spend climbing up the tree with them, hey it could be fun after all (LOL). All in all, the poem is really great satirically true.
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2004, 7:54 PM
Very downrigth true...huh i could empathize because my country is going through such thing. You know the election for presidency and those dirty politicians just, i don't know, say things they never really meant. Sad! i wish they'd rather be sensitive poets doing a poetry reading in public, i'd be much delighted.
Way to go...man of wisdom! keep those wide eyes open! change the world!
Way to go...man of wisdom! keep those wide eyes open! change the world!