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mythical (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
mythical
thats this world in a nutshell
or another insane explaination
which has meaning only to me.
There's a point in time
where reality became what it is now;
a dream that attained substance
somehow, sometime before my eyes formed
before I could breathe air
and before color could reach my cornea.
There's a day where I could create
and be the one who moves the stars;
it was before time and space
unfolded over the darkness
before there was light.
I wrote destiny when awakening
and have changed it before learning
to crawl upon tiled floors.
But all this explains nothing
forever remaining to alien eyes
mythical.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3575
Posted: February 1, 2004 1:59 PM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2004 2:41 PM PST
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