Re: a comment on wolves by sarah |
17-Jun-04/5:42 PM |
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Re: a comment on wolves by sarah |
17-Jun-04/11:33 AM |
Thank you! I'll check out titan69 too... Your comment is appreciated. :)
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Re: do you talk out loud in public? by peaceseeker |
16-Jun-04/10:31 AM |
Got better - hooked me more toward the end. My 2 cents. Good first couple of lines though, so got me interested. :) Some reworking and this could be killer. I dig the message. Nice work!
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Re: a comment on Equality by sarah |
26-Apr-04/2:06 PM |
yes. i agree now, it is two poems. or should be. thanks. :) much appreciation for your comments.
take care,
sarah
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Re: a comment on Equality by sarah |
26-Apr-04/2:05 PM |
touche to that i do suppose...
however, your hostility is off-putting. thus my rationale for appearing "impervious" to your criticism. though i appreciate comments, so thanks for yours.
take it easy,
sarah
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Re: a comment on Radiation Reflections by sarah |
26-Apr-04/1:48 AM |
well... buffy rhymes too. write me a vampire slayer limerick. haha
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Re: a comment on Equality by sarah |
26-Apr-04/1:37 AM |
lmao! wow. yeah, i wrote this for a specific audience and they totally ate it up. guess i'd better try for more pretentious poetry around here.
:) nice checklist. did you make that yourself?
peace to ya dark one,
sarah
bonus comment: you're funny
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Re: a comment on Radiation Reflections by sarah |
24-Apr-04/6:53 PM |
thank you... i really appreciate your input. :)
sarah
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Re: The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
23-Apr-04/11:01 PM |
very interesting... i like it
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Re: a comment on Radiation Reflections by sarah |
23-Apr-04/7:33 PM |
thank you...
with appreciation,
sarah
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Re: a comment on Radiation Reflections by sarah |
23-Apr-04/1:17 PM |
thanks... i am just so surprised. i've posted this elsewhere and it's never been brought to my attention that it seemed humorous.
i have much to learn here...
all comments are appreciated. thank you so much. :) sarah
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Re: a comment on Radiation Reflections by sarah |
23-Apr-04/1:14 PM |
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Re: a comment on Radiation Reflections by sarah |
23-Apr-04/9:47 AM |
oops - i just posted a regular comment instead of reply... yeah. totally genuine. i feel very silly now!
but i do thank you for your comments. (sarah)
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Re: Radiation Reflections by sarah |
23-Apr-04/9:43 AM |
(hanging head in shame)... YES! I'm serious. But you know, I guess humor comes out most when people are inadvertently funny and are being serious.
Perhaps you're right though.
ARGH!
Thanks for commenting. I feel silly now. :)
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Re: Radiation Reflections by sarah |
23-Apr-04/9:22 AM |
really? this seems funny to you guys? i am seriously surprised.
this is TRUE... my mom is terminally ill from having undergone radiation for cancer 20 years ago.
huh. i'm disappointed. but ok. whatever.
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Re: The Flame by Fire_is_cool |
18-Apr-04/9:10 PM |
sorry - didn't like it. need to elaborate or something i think. diggin the concept but it didn't pack enough punch (in my very humble opinion).
just being real. hope not to offend you know...
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Re: a comment on nonsense by sarah |
18-Apr-04/8:12 PM |
omgoodness. you're right... i'm not always so careless. thank you for the comment. i guess i'll leave it the way it is here.
:) (blushing)... thanks
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