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wolves (Free verse) by sarah
I wish we could be wolves hunting for rabbits in the dark out on a damp cool night looking for a bite We would be loyal to the last Then once our bellies were bloated we would curl up under a cool night sky, We would fit ourselves together A puzzle: perfectly positioned to nuzzle our muzzles And then ... we would doze till (long) after the sun rose

Down the ladder: Miss Understanding

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3561
Posted: June 16, 2004 10:26 AM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2004 10:41 AM PDT
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[10] DR Limerick @ 62.31.29.81 | 16-Jun-04/11:37 AM | Reply
I love poems like this 10/10
look at user titan69 he has lots of this sort of poem
[n/a] sarah @ 65.42.108.178 > DR Limerick | 17-Jun-04/11:33 AM | Reply
Thank you! I'll check out titan69 too... Your comment is appreciated. :)
[9] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > sarah | 17-Jun-04/1:34 PM | Reply
Don't listen to him, sarah! He is titan69! He's like some rabid retarded wolf disguised as another retarded rabid wolf.
[n/a] sarah @ 65.42.108.178 > zodiac | 17-Jun-04/5:42 PM | Reply
:O Oh my!
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