wolves

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Jun 2004 · Edited 16 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

I wish we could be wolves hunting for rabbits in the dark out on a damp cool night looking for a bite We would be loyal to the last Then once our bellies were bloated we would curl up under a cool night sky, We would fit ourselves together A puzzle: perfectly positioned to nuzzle our muzzles And then ... we would doze till (long) after the sun rose

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[10] DR Limerick 16-Jun-04/11:37 AM Reply

I love poems like this 10/10
look at user titan69 he has lots of this sort of poem

[n/a] sarah › DR Limerick 17-Jun-04/11:33 AM Reply

Thank you! I'll check out titan69 too... Your comment is appreciated. :)

[9] zodiac › sarah 17-Jun-04/1:34 PM Reply

Don't listen to him, sarah! He is titan69! He's like some rabid retarded wolf disguised as another retarded rabid wolf.

[n/a] sarah › zodiac 17-Jun-04/5:42 PM Reply

:O Oh my!