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wolves (Free verse) by sarah
I wish we could be wolves
hunting for rabbits in the dark
out on a damp cool night
looking for a bite
We would be loyal
to the last
Then once our bellies were bloated
we would curl up under a cool night sky,
We would fit ourselves together
A puzzle:
perfectly positioned to nuzzle our muzzles
And then ...
we would doze
till (long) after the sun rose
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Overall Rank: 3555
Posted: June 16, 2004 10:26 AM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2004 10:41 AM PDT
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look at user titan69 he has lots of this sort of poem