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wolves (Free verse) by sarah

I wish we could be wolves hunting for rabbits in the dark out on a damp cool night looking for a bite We would be loyal to the last Then once our bellies were bloated we would curl up under a cool night sky, We would fit ourselves together A puzzle: perfectly positioned to nuzzle our muzzles And then ... we would doze till (long) after the sun rose

sarah 17-Jun-04/11:33 AM
Thank you! I'll check out titan69 too... Your comment is appreciated. :)




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