poemranker ::20 most recent comments by fevriere (141-160) and replies

Comments byfevriere, 141–160 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub 12 Jan 2004, 6:09 AM
It totally hits. I don't know what I like about it but I still like it.
I like the style a lot, and wish I had found it carved into a desk.
No, no, please save it for yourself. Give us something entertaining, something I want to hear. And don't speak of daggers. Everyone knows there's no such thing.
replying on The Blues by fevriere 12 Jan 2004, 4:00 AM
It bloody well does.
on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 12 Jan 2004, 3:57 AM
Powerful words, excellent meter and rhythm.
on My thoughts and I by bdub420 12 Jan 2004, 3:37 AM
It's quite simple, like a song, which makes it effective but telling instead of showing, which bores me a bit.