Comments byzodiac, 2821–2840 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on questions by ggawrysi 20 Apr 2004, 12:27 PM
"Polished."
replying on questions by ggawrysi 20 Apr 2004, 11:24 AM
Battered candlestick doesn't make any sense.
on #20 by mikejedw 20 Apr 2004, 6:32 AM
I would beware that 1) your first line [perhaps unconsciously] sounds like Carl Sandburg's superfamoso "Fog", and 2) it doesn't make any sense to crawl on one's feet.
replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 6:28 AM
No.
on questions by ggawrysi 20 Apr 2004, 4:19 AM
We know how: Professor Plum with the candlestick.
replying on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 4:16 AM
Did you have some help typing this comment?
replying on Jesus Creased by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20 Apr 2004, 4:14 AM
way to much drama here, sounds like you are trying really hard to be cool, bad and tough. But why don't you pull your fists out of your mouth before speaking?
replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 4:11 AM
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replying on Take Four by NanceXToo 19 Apr 2004, 5:54 PM
Are you coming back, z? Your coyote villanelle is one of the best posts on the site.
on innocent voyeur by nentwined 19 Apr 2004, 5:52 PM
The (current) last line seems fine to me.
on From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik 19 Apr 2004, 2:24 PM
The last line would be better "We all went home having learned nothing." Maybe that's what you meant. This is one of your best, anyway.
on pondering by xunitedx 19 Apr 2004, 2:05 PM
everything just makes it worse / you’ll never hear me yell "it’s like my life is one big curse"
replying on untitled by waxtester 19 Apr 2004, 2:04 PM
I meant "trolls", "The gothic clocks struck their trolls."
on untitled by waxtester 19 Apr 2004, 2:00 PM
Please post the poem that begins "The gothic clocks struck their tolls" next.
replying on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 12:46 PM
Sexy, too. But I'm married, sorry.
replying on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 12:42 PM
If someone deletes a comment while you're trying to post a response to it, your response ends up floating on the comments page like a county-fair's deformed foetus in a jar, while remaining invisible on the poem-page you posted it to.
replying on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 12:36 PM
Okay, certainly everybody has realized that 94 isn't 'over 25%' of 389. I know, but it's in the red ether of Numenoria now and I can't change it. You know what I meant.
replying on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 12:28 PM
There are 389 occurrences of 'above' in poemranker poems. 94 of those are rhymed with 'love'. That is, over 25%.
on From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik 19 Apr 2004, 12:16 PM
Hey, remember all those nights when I was laying your kid sister and you were down in the bottom bunk and you didn't say anything about it or go tell your folks - were you jerking off to us then? God! That's terrible! I mean, it was your ten-year-old sister, for Christ's sake! Shame! Shame!
replying on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone 19 Apr 2004, 12:13 PM
You've gotta PRODUCE, sister! Take simone_girard -- She scored an incredible 5 love-aboves in only 4 posts. You just haven't shown that sort of determination, I'm sorry to say. No, it's back to the minor leagues for you.