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pondering (Lyric) by xunitedx
pale-faced like a mime pacing down the hall i wished i lived in peace time instead of man’s inherent fall the tests are getting harder the end will surely come my hearts welded with gold solder while beating like a steady drum i don’t care about this place i want to go away quit this endless race ‘fore i become more helpless prey nothing seems to help everything just makes it worse you’ll never hear me yell "it’s like my life is one big curse" thoughts churning in a blender draining all my power i’ll try not to surrender till i’m wilting like a flower

Up the ladder: "incomplete"
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9260
Posted: April 19, 2004 2:04 PM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2004 2:04 PM PDT
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[7] zodiac @ 152.18.33.195 | 19-Apr-04/2:05 PM | Reply
everything just makes it worse / you’ll never hear me yell "it’s like my life is one big curse"
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