poemranker ::Dance With Me by grumpycrafter

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 148232

Dance With Me

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Dec 2006 · 1 comment

Misconceptions, secret love, choreographed separate lives. Each dancing to synchronal songs. Thoughts exchanged, truths revealed, a new song begins. Slowly sway in his arms to three-quarter time. Feelings voiced, dreams shared, first he leads, then you. Music stops, the dance continues to the rhythm echoes. A waltz of love, another song begins.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.50 weighted 4.93 rank 9230 views 122 View voting details →

2 votes so far. Yours would make 3.2 votes so far

1 comment

[7] Ranger 4-Dec-06/2:19 AM Reply
Nice idea. It wants to be put to a waltz beat though.